Reviews for Pie: A Journal In Four Parts
Optimistic E chapter 4 . 3/12/2014
I LOVED this! beautifully written as if the damned demented clown wrote it himself! I loved how you managed to make him sound like he was convinced he wasnt really doing anythig well, anything to feel guilty over, . . . I've gotta share this with my friends! Great job!
Violently Red chapter 4 . 12/15/2013
That was... deranged.
D chapter 3 . 1/6/2003
You have a sick mind. I love this.
Dotty chapter 3 . 12/20/2002
This works very well. You've got the insane clown actually make sense of his own psychotic world. I think this is how he would sound to himself in his internal ramblings. There is enough funny stuff, but mixed wiht just the right amount of insanity to make you see how dangerous he is. Well done!
Black lily chapter 2 . 12/18/2002
Cool story ! (diary?)
Ghost in the Machine chapter 1 . 12/13/2002
Internally you rate this piece an 'R', which it deserves, but the site lists it as 'PG'. Just something you might want to fix.