Reviews for New Dimension New Life
dianabananaontiveros chapter 1 . 12/14/2020
What's up with Bats?!
WindAuthor chapter 1 . 6/20/2020
I think it would be better if Conner just tells the truth the first time with Superman.
Person chapter 7 . 5/23/2020
Melody is a interestingly bad character
Guest chapter 7 . 5/23/2020
Melody is not the best character
WindAuthor chapter 7 . 5/23/2020
Soo are you going to continue the story or not?
randver chapter 7 . 10/25/2019
Now that you've revised the story to remove her will you still continue it? It has enormous potential that you may or may not realize and its very nicely written.
Johnathen chapter 7 . 5/9/2018
The imp is Mr mxyzptlk
Guest chapter 5 . 4/11/2018
One problem for me is that Melody came out of fucking nowhere.
guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
I have seen challenges in other stories so I will make my own:
Its always the team who go into another universe where they meet an alternate league so why not the other way around, where the league meet alternate team
Guest chapter 4 . 4/16/2017
You had to ruin a brilliant fanfic with that bland, uninteresting, Mary sue character, melody. Well done *sarcastic clapping*
Guest chapter 9 . 4/8/2017
6 definitely
Takai-taka chapter 9 . 4/7/2017
Aww wished you would continue this story. But I'm sure whatever you do would be good.
Bright Anarchy chapter 7 . 11/24/2016
Melody is distracting from the story. She has not been given a justification for being there; she is just there. Your own characters can be used and made interesting but to just plunk them in the middle of things with no introduction or development will just frustrate people. She would be more appropriate on the JL side of the universe as the JL is already an irregular universe with the out of character mentors who have no knowledge of the YJ team. What you've done is create a scenario where neither universe is like it is supposed to be leaving the reader off balance and unable to relate to the characters. The character interactions are not bad. I really like what you did with Conner. Megan and her uncle are alright and Rob and a happy laid back bat are actually kind of funny. It probably would help if you slowed down with throwing more and more people into the story.
Christina chapter 14 . 11/7/2016
Please continue soon and I hope that Connor will tell Superman the truth. Thanks :)
Christina chapter 14 . 11/7/2016
I loved the story it's was really great. Can you do a story where Connor and his older twin are watching tv before breakfast when Match and Connor sneak out of the mountain and hang out in town but Match thinks they should go back to the mountain before anyone finds out that they are gone but they start fighting with with each other because Match knows they will be looking for them even though he wants to stay longer to but they're to busy fighting that they didn't see Superman/dad and Batman/godfather coming to them after finding out where they're and when they get there they find the twins yelling at each other and the twins busy fighting with each other they didn't feel Superman and Batman grabbing them to keep them from trying to hit each other and Batman grabs Match while Superman keeps Superboy in his arms only when they one of the adults is talking is when they notices what is happening and they froze up when they see thier father and godfather when they look up at them with a smile like they weren't doing anything wrong but Match and Superboy can see that they aren't happy with them so they try to get out of the arms that are holding them back but can't so when they get out of their arms the twins then try to fight with each other again but thier father and godfather won't let them go then they are ask who's idea it was they just point at each other and the next when the team was busy with a bad guy the twins get kidnapped by Lex Luthor when nobody was at the mountain and Nightwing and Robin are the first one to notice that they're missing and after they saved Superboy and Match from Lex Luthor Robin and Nightwing notices that Match's and Superboy's arm is bleeding and when they ask the twins what happened they don't say anything but Robin and Nightwing can tell from how the twins aren't looking at them that they're hiding something and Robin has idea what he's up to so when Superboy try's to walk away he won't let him so they start arguing but when Nightwing and Robin still won't let them go so the twins start fighting with Nightwing and Robin when they get Nightwing and Robin off of them they then use thier super jump to get away from them and but they see Nightwing and Robin are right behind them and they don't notice that the Justice League and the team is watching them and Superboy and Match's team and the Justice League have to make sure that the twins don't do anything and Superman is always keeping an eye on them too and can you make it where Superman sees Superboy and Match as his sons please and can you make Superboy the youngest of the team and when Superman is busy he has Batman watch the twins because he knows that Batman won't let anyone hurt them and he lets Robin and Nightwing watch them too and Superboy and Match doesn't like it when Superman,Batman,Nightwing, and Robin to tell them want they can and can't do they especially doesn't like it when thier father says it and when they tell him no they get upset and takes off and most of the time only thier father is the one who gets them unless he's not there and Nightwing and Robin see Match and Superboy as thier little brothers and Match is older than Superboy but Match also younger than the team and younger than Nightwing and younger than Robin too. Thanks :)
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