Reviews for Identity Crisis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t wait to see the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it possible to do a sequel with this? it's awesome. it's one of my favorites that I come back to time and time again thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I really want to see that confrontation with the Doctor... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame you abandoned this story, could have been a great story once finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |
![]() ![]() Please tell me SOMEBODY adapted this story... bcoz we all know that the author has likely abandoned this story... if not then they would've updated thid story... This story is amazing I want to read it more and more... so if anyone adapted this story than please tell all of us about it ok...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was sort of fun even if there were hits of it that confused me and I didn't understand. I was sort of hoping you'd get through the school years and then have Harry explore like the doctor does or something like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish there was more, please continue this story. |
![]() ![]() This is AMAZING please start updating this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The thing about using fancy words, is that the fancy one usually has a different definition than the one you actually need. Take the words 'reign death', for example. I'm forced to ask if you meant 'rule' death or 'pour' it, because if you meant 'pour' you should have used 'rain', instead. What you used: reign /rān/ verb hold royal office; rule as king or queen. "Queen Elizabeth reigns over the UK" noun the period during which a sovereign rules. "the original chapel was built in the reign of Charles I" What you probably should have used was actually a phrase : 'rain down' 1. To fall in large amounts, or to direct something in large amounts, usually forcefully or violently: Bombs rained down on the besieged city. 2. Rain down .com › raindown 1. To pour or fall down on someone or something in a shower from above. · 2. To cause some liquid, loose substance, or multitudinous small objects to fall down ... And because the above definition had a very large fancy word in it, I'll save you the trouble of looking it up. mul·ti·tu·di·nous /ˌməltəˈt(y)o͞od(ə)nəs/ adjective very numerous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update the story |
![]() ![]() 'known limit of regenerations' is kind of hilarious to be mentioned, since that more or less got thrown out at this point in DW canon. (And I think it actually was at the point this was written? I forget when really. I believe it was The Master getting 'given'/'allowed' extra regenerations by the council. It was one of the Doctor's opponents that was a Time Lord, at least. It was more an arbitrary limitation in any case.) And how are Fred and George surprised about who the marauders were? Didn't Snape outright tell them who they were? And also were disgusted by what they saw when shown memories of the 'pranks'? And then really toned down their pranks in Hogwarts. (I suppose even that toned down level was too much for Avalon, if they didn't temporarily increase their prank level because of an unknown reputation when starting there.) |
![]() ![]() PLEZ UPDATE PLEASE I NEED MORE PLEASE UPDATE AGGGGH |