Reviews for The Dying of the Light
Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 3 . 2/5/2006
DUN DUN DUN. O_O Wow, Julia's been stuck in the In-Between for a long time, huh?
Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 2 . 2/5/2006
Freaky! O_O I'm curious to know what Rinoa's real name is. _
Moshi Moshi Mai chapter 1 . 2/5/2006
Intriguing. O_O
higher than sky high chapter 11 . 2/3/2006
Oh wow... it's been like 2 years! Luckily I just found this fic now or I would've died from waiting that long... well I just hope your next updates don't take so long. _

Gahh I'm so confused about the plot.. mostly about Neptune and Saturn.. I hope it'll all make sense though.. wow, gosh. I can't imagine how you could even come up with something like this, it's amazing. Anyways, your writing isn't rubbish at all.. I quite like your style, though maybe you could do with a little more description. :) Not sure if that means anything.
higher than sky high chapter 9 . 2/2/2006
Hehehehe... LOL. xD
higher than sky high chapter 8 . 2/2/2006
The little details in this make this fic so much better.. and horribly sad. Like where Squall tried to say I love you but he couldn't... I still can't believe Squall went through with it.. I can't possibly imagine sacrificing your happiness for eternity for someone you love.. but... wow.

I did enjoy the scene with Seifer and Quistis. xD It was.. sort of cute! Haha.
higher than sky high chapter 7 . 2/2/2006
Ooh... gosh. I feel horrible for everybody in this fic.. they don't deserve it all! I want to bash Ultimecia's brains in. -_- Sorry I lack the intelligence right now to review, it's like 1:30 in the morning and I'm procrastinating my homework.

Once again your writing is just amazing.. sometimes I almost want to cry.
higher than sky high chapter 6 . 2/2/2006
“So, Sorceress,” he said flippantly, “where’s your Knight in Shining Leather?"

That made me laugh.. one funny line in this whole dark fic. :)

Your writing style's amazing; I'm really having a great time reading this.. it's just so sad that Squall's dead.. and well, all that Rinoa's going through. I must admit that I have no clue as to the plot.. but it's not cliched at all and they're all wonderfully in character! Normally I don't really like Seifer but in here he's tolerable... I can't wait to read more. _
Luis chapter 11 . 1/31/2006
its been like... forever. The first time I read this fic I think it was great, but I never left a review (or I least I think so) then 2 or 3 years ago I lost the interesr in fanfiction and FF8 mainly because personal problems (family, work, girlfrien, and so on..). Since October,05. I return to this hobby (read FFVI fanfictions), unfortunately many greates writers have left this site (Dark Raion, Luna Manar), so I'm very happy to read a new update of this great fic. Update as soon as you can and Thank You.
TarotDragoon chapter 4 . 1/31/2006
W00t! this is cool and once again I congratulate you on an awsome story, just one thing though... what happened to the GFs?
TarotDragoon chapter 2 . 1/31/2006
uh sorry bout that lol I thought it was just the first chapter silly me! lol ; well at leas I can keep reading now...

*cough*

-; -oops -_-; -fool

me nakigoe-chan
TarotDragoon chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
good start! its a great Idea and I would love to see whats gonna happen.

one thing though, you tend to replace your "c"s with a "K" like:

"You were supposed to be nothing but some stupid,

!insignifikant! little human girl" should be insignificant

"died for me, in far more lifetimes than I !kan kount!" should be "can count"

"It will simply make the end more...!dramatik!" once again the "k" in dramatik should be a 'c' dramatic

hope this helps! O and cant wait to see what happens

poor quisty!
Tiger-ES chapter 2 . 6/25/2005
Uh...

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What the hell was this chaptyr? It was all narriation and... the events... suck. This is not FFVI.

If the author feels he wants to delete my comments, fine, but delete them both.
Tiger-ES chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Wow, just reading this first chaptyr assures me of a great story! Somehow, though, it all sounds terribily familiar...

Anyhow, I may not read the whole thing; nakigoe-chan hasn't updated for a long time, and by the looks of other reveiws she is not finished. Hm...
JC chapter 10 . 10/24/2004
Just sat here for a few hours procrastinating and not preparing for my Economics Quiz tomorrow. It was so worth it! I admit that as a reader I do gravitate towards darker fics. I find that the best ones keep a bit of humor while laying out the drama and this definitely fits into the category. Your structure's unique and was one of the attributes which attracted me to this story. I love it when I find stories like this one. I'm a bit surprised that this is your first FF8 fic...you have a great grasp on the characters. This fic stands out in so many ways, I can't possibly list them out.

Okay, time to stop gushing. Keep writing!
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