Reviews for The Beast of Gremory |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why the hell is like every other word italicized? I think I have reached the reading comprehension required to emphasize words myself in a sentence. 'Naruto pulled tight to Raynare's coal colored /wings/' Like, why is wings italicized here? It's not just here, it happens in like every sentence in his encounter with her, it's unbearable to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, you brag about words but those words mean shit if you spend it all on describing just useless things and not actually on the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 13. |
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![]() ![]() Demasiadas palabras para no ir a ningún lado, podrías borrar la mayor parte y no se perdería nada relevante. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() right i forgot why i stopt reading this trash now i remember |
![]() ![]() ![]() this little back and forth between them is outright cringe and pathetic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a story bro pls don't write like this please |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing so far, can’t wait for the next update someday ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() really loved this whole arc |
![]() ![]() ![]() Feels like this story has no motive I mean there is no point naruto is being a bitch and u made look all angry when facing rias about letting a human die but u just let it go I mean what is the point of this. U could of made it where rias was ashamed of her actions and wanted naruto to not be mad at her but u just made let it go. Kinda shit would not read |
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