Reviews for Twins
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
I like to know the result... Are they twins
Guest chapter 4 . 5/24/2017
The story is great... Hope for more
Khept chapter 4 . 4/17/2016
I really love the story good luck in your exams and hope things settle down soon and I look forward to the next chapter of this story...
Guest chapter 4 . 4/14/2016
Thank you for this answer. Good luck with your 'real life'
Guest chapter 3 . 4/14/2016
French fan

Your last update as à year ago. Will you finish this story ? Thank you for an answer
idadri chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
ok, they are...?
i would like see the both meet...
yellowcallalilly chapter 3 . 10/8/2015
Hi there! Hope you havent drop this one! :) I'm loving it! Thanks for sharing.
Hoosier65 chapter 3 . 5/7/2015
you are nasty! nice chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 5/4/2015
I really like this story. There are a lot of grammar errors but you just have to read each line twic to get the errors down.
974lk chapter 3 . 5/4/2015
Hi there! I really appreciate your story! And this cliffhanger is just...wow!
Thank you for this fic and good luck with your exams!
lovepride chapter 3 . 5/3/2015
BROTHER ?
zats chapter 2 . 4/30/2015
Enjoyed what I read so far. Look forward to more.
Maria Luisa Illarnizzi chapter 2 . 4/29/2015
wow can't wait to read more...
Guest chapter 2 . 4/27/2015
Wth get a beta this concept is great but you lack a lot of proper English a lot tenses out of place. This is a good story just get someone proof read
Guest chapter 2 . 4/27/2015
This still has a good premise and overall the story is solid, but I would strongly urge you to get a beta reader. You have a lot of confusion with in/on/at, as well as some missing words and awkward phrases here and there. I'm assuming English is not your first language due to the sentence structure etc. It's not that you don't write well - in fact I like your style - it's just a little distracting to read some of those phrases.

I don't really get why Deeks would have separated himself from the others when they were getting their luggage, since they all would have gotten to that area together well before the bags came off the plane, but I'll let it go for the purpose of the story I suppose.

Look forward to the next chapter. Hopefully there's an explanation for the doppelganger coming soon?
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