Reviews for Tournament? Triwizard? Sure
Monster King chapter 1 . 5/19
Planar-Walking-Entertainment chapter 2 . 4/21
Here’s an idea. Since he used a spell to identify his line and found out his mom was born from the evans magical line, grandmother a squib, he conjure up from other mudane borns he knows, hermione, justin (the guy with the camera), and then reveal salazar’s line, as well as show them the portrait. Having actual proof the mudane borns are not mudbloods and being able to get the history straight from the horses mouth could help with the reputation, if not cast his previous one in doubt.
gabzep chapter 2 . 2/23
This a really good!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/23
So Harry has to grovel for hermione not believing him? Hope anyone you love cuckolds you. You would deserve it.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/23
I hate brainless morons who forgive such evil shit. That doesn’t make you a good person. Just a fucking stupid one. Harry forgiving dumbledor is retarded. Bet you would forgive a cheating wife and then lick another mans seed from her rotten crotch while smiling. Hope your run over by a bus you stupid moron.
LoveNCIS chapter 2 . 1/21
Awesome story
Rebmul chapter 1 . 10/27/2020
this was very nice i liked it alot going in my faves
Bookworm chapter 2 . 9/26/2020
OMG! I love it! hmm I think you should make Harry and Hermione make up and also talk about living at Sirius's, maybe you can even point out like Ron and Harry together again and maybe a Mrs Weasley angry with Ginny or something...

You could even come up with something cute and cool at they’re wedding!
JustAnotherFan217 chapter 2 . 8/27/2020
Damn good one-shot! Wish it was longer honestly, but this was a very nice read. Good job!
akshutalankar chapter 1 . 8/14/2020
It's 4th year how can Hermione be prefect?
odonnellzoo99 chapter 2 . 8/11/2020
The back and forth conversation structure as Harry and Cedric brainstormed worked for me. Viktor and Luna together at this age did not. For U.S. reference, think of a high school Senior dating an 8th grader.
akshutalankar chapter 2 . 8/9/2020
About Salazar.. how about showing everyone his portrait in one of the chambers. Every room is as it is under password.. so show them only one room like dueling room n have sal talk to them... Of course that would be after his 7th year so he can deny everyone entry since he won't be in school much n no one would be able to get in without him.
Lottie chapter 1 . 8/6/2020
This was an original story that was enjoyable to read. It had enough original parts to the story to make it interesting, but enough cannon to make it still seem like Harry Potter.:) !
mysteryheart chapter 1 . 7/30/2020
why did you ruin thid brilliant story with harry forgiving the old coot?
Unslaadahsil chapter 1 . 7/7/2020
Okay, PSA: Luna Lovegood is 13 in Harry's fourth year. Viktor Krum is 17 if not 18.
STOP pairing them together!
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