Reviews for Alternate History
propensity chapter 32 . 4/26
I'm glad that I read this story. I enjoyed your writing style and unique twists on this HP universe. Thanks for sharing it.
Kris2495 chapter 32 . 4/3
Such a great story. Wondrous to behold! So many twists and turns.
Guest chapter 32 . 3/22
Great fic! Truly amazing!
EdDbookfan1018 chapter 32 . 3/1
I am very happy I found your story. It was an unique angle on time travel. Thank you!
TexasBean chapter 32 . 2/11
This was so good, and a unique take on the whole time travel aspect. I'm definitely going to be rereading this again.
TexasBean chapter 17 . 2/10
I usually review completed fics at the final chapter, but I just had to say that a chapter like this is such a breath of fresh air. The drama wasn't needlessly dragged out, the people actually TALKED, accusations weren't thrown around due to miscommunications that get dragged out across x-number of chapters...
I've pretty much been reading this fic non-stop, and I've enjoyed it immensely.
Spannerspoon chapter 32 . 11/8/2019
Amazing!

Brilliantly written and throughly enjoyed!

...sequel?
KingTJStevens chapter 32 . 6/7/2019
This was such an interesting story! I liked how this happened early enough that Hermione didn't know about the horcruxes or Snape's friendship with Lily or Dumbledore dying. Hermione got sent to the new timeline before the war really started and though she didn't have too much information, they were able to figure out everything and still stop Voldemort. Some of the changes were surprising but I really liked the new timeline you created. I really liked how Draco turned out now that he was raised by Sirius! I also liked how Hermione seemed to have a really good support network of friends like Lavender, Seamus and Neville. In the original timeline, it sometimes felt like Hermione's entire life revolved around Harry. Speaking of Harry, I felt kind of uncomfortable with how he turned out in Slytherin. I wish we got some more backstory on all of these characters in the new timeline since they seem very interesting. Overall, this was a really enjoyable story.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/24/2019
Excellent
Guest chapter 10 . 5/24/2019
Long, tedious chapter. Why is this so unlike all the good ones?
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2019
Lol, yes, really, what could possibly go wrong?
Guest chapter 6 . 5/23/2019
You are doing a great job with character and relationship development, and the dialogue is completely natural. Bravo! Grammar, spelling and punctuation are so good that they never distract me. I'm impressed.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/7/2019
Seriously, what the heck is up with authors today? You give WAY too much away in your silly notes. STOP THE FRAKKING SPOILERS! Seriously, it’s annoying af
leafpool310 chapter 32 . 4/13/2019
I really enjoyed this story, even if I'm left with questions. I'm guessing Nadya will wake up, with that little bit of a hint at the end, but what on Earth is the relationship between Severus and Sirius? And where's Ron been for most of the story? Is Arthur really dead? Why did Hermione's parents divorce? There's just so much I wanna know!
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 1/18/2019
Good chapter, glad to see most of the changes seem to be happy ones. Having a friend who likes to study must be heaven to Hermione, who in canon spent most of her years whacking Harry and Ron into doing their own homework.

Still, I wonder if Snape is still having to brew the Wolfsbane Potion *and* substitute for Lupin when he is under the weather.

And what is Sirius Black doing there?

Does that mean the reason Snape is nicer might be because he wasn't tortured for seven long years as a student?
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