|Reviews for The Dark Lord of Naboo|
| steel.metal14 chapter 14 . 10/15
incredible. thank you
| Inv0ke chapter 2 . 9/5
The real problem I have with this is that so many people came back in time and all of them would have different goals
| Tony Hobbes Jr chapter 14 . 8/22
Honestly sad that you havent updated this in a while, this story has such potential.
Hope u can come back to it
| hnh058513 chapter 12 . 8/15
| Angielada chapter 14 . 7/19
is there an end? when are you gonna continue the story?
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/26
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/2
Yeah story isnt for me :/ last two fics like this were amazing but sorry this is a no
| Scarease chapter 13 . 5/7
Problems was lack proper enforcement laws ,corrupt laws ,loopholes ,corrupt Senate that placed laws ,their connections .One major reason for leaving republic was do corruption ,bious laws that favored one group over other ,the likely financial problems that Sidious used to make difficult for some planets and groups leading resentment of republic .the Use Jedi as enforces often leading to short term relief but fix problem for groups on planet went negioate with or for .Often not history lead to conflicts and rebellions they sent to settle in first place .So local anger for having some outsiders give them orders ,working for individual create problem .This fueling dislike Jedi .
| Scarease chapter 9 . 5/7
Darkside quit Nast yes but also bring change ,self dependence ,it about passion ,the will to act it want to dominate and be dominated ,it revels in freedom of expression the problem is that those touch it do have real train ,attachment to ankle themselves against being consumed by it .It the Darkside of force and to be true Jedi is find balance between light an Dark to have harmony with oneself .Darkside and light not good or evil it actions of person that uses it ,they ability to control themselves and not consumed to much either side .
| Scarease chapter 7 . 5/7
Aniline you need work bit child so thing not to clear for enemies notice something is off about you .If fooled thinking your just a naive ,innocent and skilled kid then underestimate you and use that to your advantage .
| Scarease chapter 6 . 5/7
If read comic and some clone war series to watch their quit few Jedi and few force sensitive group did not follow the code of Jedi .
| Scarease chapter 4 . 5/7
Some need some counciling for shit went through as A Sith .Killing Mual like severely alter time line and plans of Sidious .
| Scarease chapter 3 . 5/7
Do realize Whole Jedi order likely became one force consider how many of them died .Yoda become one force is like set things right in Jedi order consider few hundred or thousand years old .
With fall Jedi other thing placed role was those did not have attachment to humanity and life consisting saw everyone joined force when died did not matter if died was Becuase force willed it not Becuase of their poor leadership skills .
Consider Vadar had now much what Palpatine did ,how did it ,events lead to war and such ,his weaknesss and he could find mean ruining Palpitine before he gain power do how much bows man .So Vadar/Anakin could total fuck his plans .Example find means to destroy ,jam or shut down the control Chip in the clones like save countless number of Jedi .
With Qui Gon alive like provent Dooku from join Sidious .hell gain aid few Jedi saw end coming would great boon .
Gaining evidance against trade federation for the Queen ,spy program to gather Intel ,video of Palpatine and such to reveal Palpatine monster he is .remove corrupt Senators and prepare for the Outsider will invade ,and other major threats .
Provent some tragedies and limit lives lost during Clone wars .
| Scarease chapter 2 . 5/7
Plus what led to fall Jedi multiple factors One their consolidation of all their knowledge ,power and force in Corsant temple ,isolating themselves rest galactic communities make now real unstanding politics ,events and such of people went to negioate with or for ,they being to tied to politicians and nobility become more like senate enforce then peacekeepers ,they complete shunning of emotional attachment leading them to distant from people ,no real loyalty ,have real reason to fight against temptation ,the not excepting their emotions .Then had those extremist saw emotions should stomped out and any touch Darkside was punishable with death or inprisonment .Then the arrogents those refused change code leading to stagnation and easy manipulation of Senate and Sith line of Bane .Then those saw selves knowing better then the force stomping out Jedi would bring chance to order .Lead many killed ,secretly inprison or leaving order .All lead Jedi loss in touch people and the Force .So those refused and saw any change as a threat .THIS Leading lose of force ,stagnation and to their eventual end since lost balance within themselves out right rejecting emotions ,attachments and Darkside of themselves .
| baron sanmdi chapter 5 . 5/5
who did he kill ? me, i'm dying