Reviews for Savior
Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2014
Sequel
Raicheda chapter 6 . 12/22/2013
? i thought hermione had died? does that mean shes back as a ghost now?
Nagilover4ever chapter 14 . 12/2/2013
Love it. Please do a sequel.
confused reader chapter 6 . 10/17/2013
This chapter makes no sense. If Hermione died last chapter, how is she still alive and talking in this one...?
Hvshi Ninak Aya Neko chapter 7 . 9/13/2012
In the previous chapter you kIlled off Hermione. But to paragraphs later she is alive and arguing with Ron and draco. You also have a lot of incomplete and run on sentences.
Goku
UnfortunatelyAddicted chapter 7 . 8/30/2011
AAARRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHH! THIS STORY IS AMAZING BUT THE GRAMMAR! Oh woe is me. I guess it's a testimony to the the content that I haven't yet stopped reading this but seriously... There are whole words missing, you feel as though you're missing whole sentences half the time and much as you try to place words to get the jist of the sentence you still come up blank. Aside from that the overall story and storyline is really good, really readable and likeable... If only the grammar were as impressive...
angellahan chapter 14 . 7/21/2011
This is really good and you should definitely write a sequel but I'm confused let me get this right. Harry is alive, Voldemort is dead, Lucious is the real dark lord, and Draco is evil. Please clarify what happened like I said confused.
Brandyk chapter 14 . 5/15/2011
Like the rest, I was confused but hten again everything was happening at first in Harry's mind and was real so...

I have to admit at the end I was a little sad he became good again but accept it as it was... but that epiloge gave me hope form more disaster, gore and angst ;P

Like it so much... wish and vote for a sequel.
Niwaki chapter 6 . 1/9/2011
Didn't you just kill Hermione off, why's she here again?
annian3 chapter 6 . 8/27/2010
ehm didnt Hermione die ?
pippy93 chapter 14 . 6/30/2010
I love the story! But I'm really confused on what was happening.
Kircala chapter 6 . 6/12/2010
um... Hermione is suddenly alive again in this chapter? WTF? I thought she was dead! _ You need to change that..

~vamp~
Guest chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I tried to read this, but I had to stop after a few sentences...
Q3APo chapter 14 . 11/2/2009
om, sorry. i like your story but i'm still a bit confused. so the true dark lord is lucius?
ashes chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
Wait, Hermiones dead, wtf?
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