If this is the quality of the rewrite i shudder to think of how awful the grammar is in the first one

lol should of guessed vulcan means fire never understood ehy people like the fire elements its only good for burning people alive or metalworking.

any mc who likes fire needs to be a psycho.

Please update soon

Man I remember reading this on Harry Potter FanFic Archive years ago. If you continue it I hold you upload more of it to AO3 so you don't have to deal with this sites nonsense

hmmm pity so still pathetic beta bitch harry so ahhh well fuck this trash

looks better hope hes not some fucking pussy and beta bitch like canon Harry

No not training tools Wand is a weapon that help wizard Focus his magic and make spell easier to cast and even stronger than do it wandlessly..

Elder Wand exist for reason..

Very enjoyable read. One thing I noticed. As they are getting off the express, Ron comments about wondering why Harry has 2 pets. At this point, Ron would not know about Hedwig as she flew on ahead and was not on board the train. Greatly enjoying reading the story!

Paul Garlach

Harry sucked Dumbledore's dick and follows him and gives him everything, including his asshole. Fucking slave likes being fucked in the ass and abused. Stupid dumbass

This has got to be the most boring chapter yet

Is this story still on hold?

Ahh yes. If I too could casually dig miles underground for rare resources and weald a variety of magical powers I would also ignore all that and sell myself and do sexual favours for food, and to police and doctors no less. I’m sorry but that’s a load of bullshit. The only people that would do that are people in the wrong crowd with no possible way out or by some weird choice and Charlotte’s not that in the slightest. And to tell all that to a seven something year old child no less. Must be a patron of the closest mental facility.

Also how does literally every single smuck and their dog know about jumping when it’s part of a yet unreleased movie!? And electricity isn’t some grand weakness, only interference with the mind and physically stopping them from moving into a portal would matter.

I’m out. This is some particular cheesy, unbelievable and hard to read drivel and from the bit ahead I skimmed… it doesn’t improve.

I feel like the so called re-write is just fixing the grammar of the first two chapters only. So far the rest is hard to read or take seriously.

I always forget how you're a Hermione fan boy what people see in her character I'll never know. I personally find every version of her utterly annoying but every fucker and their mother throw her as Harry's pairing or drop her into the harems personally I'd like less Hermione in all ways possible, I just don't see her appeal who likes bookworms that boss you around and thinks your retarded because you don't believe every word in a book? The only character development I know she has in the books is she gets two friends... That's about it. Oh and punches mouthoff. But other then that she's always the bossy know it all that believes every word a teacher says. People say authority but she ignores the ministry a lot so she's just a massive stickler for being a teacher's pet. Ignores the guy who saved her and actually gave her friends when the dude she "loves" would of happily left her to get crushed by s troll. And she does so twice all because a teacher said "do it" the fuck kinda character development is that?

Any way rant over moral of my review book would be better with out buckteeth Jones in my opinion

For the title of the next Saga I like Shadowed Hearts. Also I vote that you keep the Basilisk alive.

Hey, you asked.