Reviews for Come Undone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Soooo good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stayed up until 3 am to finish this, totally worth it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh that was a roller coaster! i like your writing so much and i think you made a perfect psychopathic tom. i loved reading the quotes, would be interested in reading more from this story if you ever decide to write a side story? idk if your still taking prompts, but i was wondering if you would be interested in writing a tomione fic that’s inspired by the “you” netflix show? hopefully you don’t kill hermione in your story like joe does with his lovers lol. maybe both of them can be psychos? |
![]() ![]() Tom knows what he is doing! |
![]() ![]() This proves how scary things can get... |
![]() ![]() Oh wow! |
![]() ![]() He is very manipulative |
![]() ![]() Tom is absolutely crazy |
![]() ![]() IH wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the idea, but the ending felt rushed. I would like to add that I liked your style of writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This first chapter is amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm begging you to update. This is one of my favourite stories here. Please come back :) I love your Tom, he is so close to the original (not a soppy one some authors make him) and your Hermione is fantastic - weak but strong , lost but smart. Please update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is like two years old and it's not a big deal, but being a French person who cook (and is admittedly a bit obsessive about it ) I feel like I should mention that : you don't finish making foie gras on the day you serve it, you finish it at least 12 hours before serving (but generally, you make the final preparation the day before to make sure it will be firm enough to cut into slices) ; it's always served as an appetizer, it's not a main course unless you use it to flavor something else, and mentioning what appetizer you are cooking for your party is kinda weird (and it's not really the kind of thing you cook for a party anyway, considering making it in great quantities would be complicated and really pricey) ; nobody would ever include 'au torchon' while talking about it. It's like you had a conversation about the roast you are making by saying 'the roast cooked in the oven'. There, that was the obnoxious food review of the week |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was a bit hurried but your writing style is awesome! The story was disturbing and made me think a bit of exorcism might be necessary. Though definitely not the writing style I usually lean to, the way you developed the plot and characters made me stick with it. I actually enjoyed it! Very well done! |