Reviews for Not Very Brotherly
I'maMePanda chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
I was just rereading this and looked at the reviews and couldn't believe I hadn't reviewed it before. In fact your story is the reason I started watching the show. I'm still sad they cancelled it.

It is absolutely great, you weave the material from the show in with your own writing flawlessly. I felt that you handled Backstrom's decision making progress leading to the spanking really well, and I loved Valentines reactions. The dialogue between the two, with the "and not the fun kind" exchange, was very natural to the show.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
This was amazing! I could totally see this happening! You should do one where Everette spanks Valentine for dissobeying him and for trying to shoot Norwest in episode 13.
Maddie chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
This was so good :) I'm so glad you wrote it
vhs chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
I didn't think there would be one of these up lol! This story is awesome :D I hope you write more!
lilyflower101 chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
Love it! :)
wandamarie chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
He did earn the spanking good job thanks