This story is truely enjoyable
Please keep up the good work

Weiss reacts by Elf collaborator?

Love your work. Really do. Hell I binge read this story in like two days. I only would just like to say one thing though bruh. Please don't make weiss and jaune get together. Or maybe make it a harem for Jaune because obviously all da girls want Jaune's "sword"? (see what I did there? with the sword? no? too terrible? ok i'll shut up now?) No weiss bullshit! Oh! Also read the fairy tail manga. It's starting to get intense. (suggested it because your profile says you like fairy tail)

I notice Weiss made no attempt to cover up and after the "PERVERT!" and slap she calmed down and wasn't bothered at all being half-naked in front of Jaune.

wait...SUN!? plot twist!

I...actually really love the jaunexAlice/Weiss ship I have never even thought of one of the characters personality change with the main falling in love with the new personality. You know its good writing when you nearly cry with jaune at the end there.

strangely I really like Jaune as a man who can not only have 'feminine skill setsewing, kniting ect, ect) but also able to bring out a womans inner beauty with clothing as well!

huh I thought it was strange when cardin immediately stopped when one of his teammates called velvet a freak. I like good guy cardin woot

ohh thats interesting neo has a little brother (best joke ever btw I literally LOLed) and roman is a father to her. (hes the editor I sorta figured he had to fit in somewhere.) blake was jaunes childhood friend Im assuming man this chapter was all kinds of awesome all aroynd goodness!

Yay! Sao abriged reference...I think.

Neo a booksigning really why the hell would you do tjat to the poor guy xDD I can imagine jaune dressing as a woman haha. Oh brave default is where Ds notes comes from makes sense never played the game though.

Jane caur 'Jaune arc' omg its so easy to see its rediculous but only because we knew before hand xD and loveless? As is Genesis's beloved novel he carries around 'Loveless'? You are awesome! Dont get the reference to D's notes though.

The revelation of his secret is imminent. I can see it, I can feel it. I can TASTE it! And when it finally comes, it will be GLORIOUS!

I'm so angry for not being caught up in this series - or fic...whatever. Or maybe I was but I just forgot. Meh. I lost my - you know what - when Weiss said she could do it because she played a lot of Angry Birds.

But... Why'd Jaune ask Blake if she had something against Fauna that time at Nora's bar if he had known that she was one from the start? Unless he was just teasing...