It might be a trend that no matter how Jaune is written, be it in RWBY cannon or fanfiction, shitty luck is something of a defining trait that will always stick with him.

Also I snickered on the part on when he mentions how he can get changed so fast. A situation like that requires changing clothes faster than the speed of light.

Good, Good. This is looking deliciously diabolical, I do hope young Arc will succeed with whatever you have planned for him.

Umm dude Pyrrha is a THREE-time champion not a FOUR-time.

I like a majority of stories when the author is having fun writing it. By your methods, I like the comedy that falls into place with the story. So what I enjoyed so far was how diverse the characters are in the ways you wrote them so far, because of how they remain in character so far.

Ruby was the most memorable, well I just think she's adorable. On Blake's "art" could lead to interesting character conversations later on with the story. I have no idea on what to think in the case of Pyrrha, though, by her early thoughts, I think it's slightly scary but exciting at the same time.

For Jaune, he's still the adorkable character we all love. There are some minor hints to his character, and I like that. I like it when.a characters development is paces throughout the story.

My only qualm about the story is a couple of grammer and word usage here and there, and it's at a minimal and doesn't take me out of the immersion that much.

I look forward to your continued work.

Full harem please and please make Jaune a good fighter

Pretty sure my nearest. Ruby is in another universe so... Also I'd like to know how far you planned this out. I just want t o get a feel for what good authors on this site usually do.

Why do I get the feeling its jaune who's the writer of ninja's of love or possible his mom from this fan comic I read

If you write like stuff like this, this story will soon become my guilty as pleasure.

This was pretty good made me laugh, so defiantly something you should continue.

This fanfic pleases me. Please continue this story! :P

This is awesomeand funny XD hopefully you can add coco velvet cinder neo emerald melanie and militia and glynda to the harem list

damn when you said this was Oc its REALLY Oc this fic is like im watching a harem anime like Nisekoi,Highschool DxD,Mangaka-san to Assistant-san and many more.i like this fic and let me guess Jaune is the writer of Ninja's of love and Blake is the girl he falls for?well its kind of natural considering their voice actors are going out in real me guess Jaune is also the author of Loveless from final fantasy and other books huh?...oh my god please let that happen and dude is Crocea mors his weapon or is it something else.