Reviews for Embers
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
You bad person. The flame was supposed to ignite nallen . Thank you for writing. Those of us that cannot write but love to read appreciate it.
bjq chapter 1 . 5/11/2015
on a side note does anyone find it funny how JOLENE looks like and older version of NELL
Aquamarin28626 chapter 1 . 5/5/2015
These feelings he's trying to choke are feelings that will come back. The flame still burns. He just doesn't know it yet...
Great story. I enjoyed reading it.
OhBuddy66 chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
Great tag - I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing it!
Caro0909 chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
AARRGG... Men! for a seriuosly intelligent man Callen displays a lot of stupidity here. He should go for Nell.
She can bring happiness to his life. I know about age difference, it doesn't matter.
Having said this, great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Man I wish hetty would just die.
Gina Callen chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
*THUD* Every time I read this i wanna send him oxygen to help fan those flames. he should have tried. really maybe she feels the same way about him age difference be darned. (trust me I know and you know age differences don't matter T ). Great Story though loved it.
blue dogs rock chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
fabulous chapter