Reviews for Shape Up or Ship Out
B4bidden chapter 28 . 9/24/2017
now im sad ive come 2 the stopable point when I really want to read more pls update
B4bidden chapter 18 . 9/24/2017
lol.. stupid fb app tried tricken me there is more to read.
B4bidden chapter 17 . 9/24/2017
wish there was more
Guest chapter 28 . 7/17/2017
Every time there's a story like this I'm always pissed that she lets dr. Cullen and esme act as her parents after abandoning her. I mean he sounded so condescending and pretentious telling Peter thank you for looking after her. Bella is not his child and they only knew each other like a year. I always get mad that she takes them back. I understand forgivening them but becoming a Cullen being a daughter instead of a separate family like the denalis. He said it was for your own good. Wtf do not that that pos have any say over anything you do Bella. hello! lol maybe it's just me but things don't go back to how they were
natztash chapter 28 . 3/14/2017
Please update
Bell 1 chapter 25 . 12/11/2016
Well, I'm extremely disappointed to find this is the last chapter of a story showing up as 28 chapters, only to discover there is supposed to be another sequel. :(

I wish you had just continued this story. Good luck on your endeavor with it.

As I said before, I was loving the Peter and Bella portion of this story and would have liked to have seen/read more, getting to know Peter more too.
Bell 1 chapter 24 . 12/11/2016
This chapter is a bit contradictory.

When did Bella "...see what [Jane] can do..."? Up to this point in the story, Bella never went to Voltera to "rescue" Edward.

Then later, why did Jane say, "So you're Bella. Interesting."? This second part contradicts Bella's earlier statement about seeing what Jane can do.

Other than that... loving the Peter and Bella parts of this story. :D
Kushka chapter 28 . 7/18/2016
Just Me And Jazz chapter 5 . 3/4/2016
Peter is supposed to look similar to Jasper.. but a pretty decent story.
Sassyvampmama chapter 28 . 1/12/2016
GeezerWench chapter 27 . 1/2/2016
Liked your story, sweetie. Didn't have enough Peter in it, but oh well.
GeezerWench chapter 25 . 1/2/2016
Edward the human drinker now.

Guess he doesn't care about his whole "family" being destroyed.
GeezerWench chapter 24 . 1/2/2016
Edward? Overreact?

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
GeezerWench chapter 23 . 1/2/2016
A little alone time for our couple.
GeezerWench chapter 22 . 1/2/2016
Mind control?
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