Reviews for As One Does
ppeaches chapter 6 . 8/5
Ugh, Bella is so patronising in this. The way she goes on you'd think she was middle-aged or something, constantly mentioning how young and immature he is. She's only years older than him! Plus he's 18 in a few months
Bevey99 chapter 9 . 7/1
Sort of a cliffie. damnit
Bevey99 chapter 6 . 7/1
The age of consent in most states is 16. 11 for age 18 and 8 for age 17. So must be in one of the states were 18 is the legal age.
Bevey99 chapter 2 . 7/1
good convo
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/1
I don't remember this, but I should I read every entry. Humm
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26
Would love to have had an epilogue to this, to see where hey are five years down the line or maybe even ten!
LuvnmesumEdward chapter 9 . 6/3
I absolutely loved this! I hope one day you will continue it :)
TwiTwiAgain chapter 9 . 5/5
I loved it! Sure an epic would be nice. But since this was complete a while ago...
Anyway, thanks for sharing your writing talent.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 6 . 5/5
I lol'd and snorted at Edward's comment in the closet. I'm still giggling as I went straight to comment. Because sometimes I forget. Back to reading.

Wow, now I'm crying. What a chapter.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 5 . 5/5
Sad
TwiTwiAgain chapter 4 . 5/5
Aww, but he called shotgun to be next to her!
TwiTwiAgain chapter 2 . 5/5
I don't usually like an older Bella, but this is great.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 1 . 5/5
Haha!
missmelly chapter 9 . 3/21
How utterly sweet and sexy.
lissaboss1993 chapter 9 . 2/3
I wanted to be weirded out by this age gap thing but I remembered that I was actually in a relationship with a 20yearold for 8months before I turned 18 and we used to kiss and make out and touch a little bit but I waited until another 8months after my 18th birthday before we had sex so I get it
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