Reviews for As One Does
Guest chapter 9 . 3/8
this makes me happy :)
Mylisssa chapter 9 . 2/22
This was great, the waiting, the chemistry build up, and his elation when she admitted her feelings past and present. Years later, someday epis are always welcome.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/7
This was so super cute! I know it made a cute story for the grandkids!
KDMCAM chapter 9 . 1/7
This was soooo cute! Def. made a great story for the grandkids!
S1203 chapter 9 . 1/7
Great little piece. thank you
ppeaches chapter 6 . 8/5/2017
Ugh, Bella is so patronising in this. The way she goes on you'd think she was middle-aged or something, constantly mentioning how young and immature he is. She's only years older than him! Plus he's 18 in a few months
Bevey99 chapter 9 . 7/1/2017
Sort of a cliffie. damnit
Bevey99 chapter 6 . 7/1/2017
The age of consent in most states is 16. 11 for age 18 and 8 for age 17. So must be in one of the states were 18 is the legal age.
Bevey99 chapter 2 . 7/1/2017
good convo
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
I don't remember this, but I should I read every entry. Humm
Guest chapter 9 . 6/26/2017
Would love to have had an epilogue to this, to see where hey are five years down the line or maybe even ten!
LuvnmesumEdward chapter 9 . 6/3/2017
I absolutely loved this! I hope one day you will continue it :)
TwiTwiAgain chapter 9 . 5/5/2017
I loved it! Sure an epic would be nice. But since this was complete a while ago...
Anyway, thanks for sharing your writing talent.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 6 . 5/5/2017
I lol'd and snorted at Edward's comment in the closet. I'm still giggling as I went straight to comment. Because sometimes I forget. Back to reading.

Wow, now I'm crying. What a chapter.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 5 . 5/5/2017
Sad
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