Very enjoyable to read and was just nice good job

. no other fic has touched me as deeply as this one has . It feels like w/ every fic i read , im just trying to replicate the same feelings I felt when I read this for the first time . looking at ur fics that precedes this one , ur writing improves w/ each release - which is a shame knowing this is ur last LAS work, having been written 7 yrs ago.. . I rly hope u come back soon or at least are still out there somewhere, hopefully still writing n I hope u read this knowing u have had A lasting impact on me .

One of my favourite reads. I frequently come back to this story. I was really looking forward to reading more of your eva work only to find out you’ve disappeared. Really hoping for a comeback.

no other fic has touched me as deeply as this one has . It feels like w/ every fic i read , im just trying to replicate the same feelings I felt when I read this for the first time . looking at ur fics that precedes this one , ur writing improves w/ each release - which is a shame knowing this is ur last LAS work, having been written 7 yrs ago.. . I rly hope u come back soon or at least are still out there somewhere, hopefully still writing n I hope u read this knowing u have had A lasting impact on me .

I reread this story occasionally since it’s such a wonderfully loving fic. Just reading the authors note at the end of it all fills me with the warmth I felt the first time around. Thank you

There aren't enough Evangellion fanfics featuring that Langley bastard. The damage that piece of shit did to his daughter makes Gendo seem like a good father. This son of a bitch was present in his daughter's life as a bystander, turning a blind eye while her lonely and damaged daughter carried the double yoke of being a grade skipper genius and an Eva pilot, to the point that her equally selfish lover had to complain about his own daughter's disturbing behavior.
I always wondered what that pig's reaction would be if at some point after Third Impact he ended up reuniting with his physically and mentally mutilated daughter.
To my disgust the son of a bitch would probably do what he did here, look away and act like nothing happened.
If there is a person who deserves Asuka to throw all the cancerous bile that has corroded her soul at him, it is him, not Shinji, Misato or another.
I wonder if one day that soulless being would feel the remorse he deserves for having poisoned his daughter's life for his petty egocentrism and moral cowardice, because he must pay for what he did, he does not deserve to enjoy even an iota of comfort while his daughter suffers because of him.

I've been reading Eva fics for a long, *long* time. Strike Fiss, Axel Terizaki, all the greats going back twenty-plus years.

This is possibly my favorite Eva fic of them ALL. The writing is sublimely moving, the turns of phrase polished and poetic, the characterizations absolutely spot-on. A wonderfully accurate depiction of how the Children would turn out post 3I, with more than a few scenes that brought tears to my eyes. An instant classic.

Ok this was amazing to read. I love the way the actions are described and the emotions behind every word being said is just on point. Honestly this was a good read.

This was GOD TIER

Wow! This was... Amazing! You're such a great writer. Your story was so perfect, it has a lot of drama, hurt, comfort and romance. Pure perfection. Since now, for me, this is gonna be the canon for Evangelion.

Beautiful.
I don't have other words to describe this story, simply beautiful, short, credible, loving and above all an improvement that we all wanted to see with those characters that I hate and at the same time love so much.
Thanks for writing this story.
(By the way the girl could have been called Aki ... No? Okay)

This was a really sweet short story. I enjoyed the development and also loved Asuka's outburst at her father. My only complaint is that I wish this story could have been longer, but that's minor. This gave me everything I wanted and I'm satisfied. Fantastic story.

Ouch...that last message hurt me

my god was this amazing. like all of the character development and plot progression felt natural and the ending felt like they deserved it

Beautiful and Amazing! I have really enjoyed it.
A cute Asushin post Nerv, instrumentality, ...
Sometimes I want to believe that it could not cost them so much to get together as a couple, but being realistic it would be as you have written, they must have a process and because of their personalities, Asuka above all, it would cost more.
Grear job!