Reviews for Whiskey Time Travel
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
Awesome first chapter. Badass Harry is always fun to read. Bones would be a good match to keep Harry grounded lol.
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Harry would be stupid if he let Albus get his hands on him again. Harry is a much more effective combatant against Voldemort on his lonesome :D

There is next to no chance that Albus Dumbledore will figure out who Harry happens to be. Harry having longer hair probably more or less nullifies the Potter mop to an extent, so he actually probably more closely resembles Snape than James right now…

ROFLMAO, I would never have guessed… is Rosmerta a fan of Alexander Dumas’ novel or Disney’s cartoon of the same name?

Technically they would need a fourth person to be the Musketeers, as the Musketeers consisted of Athos, Aramis, Porthos, and D’Artagnan. Yes, I know the title of the book is “The Three Musketeers” but most people recognize D’Artagnan as the honorary Fourth Musketeer.

UFOs? I bet Luna had a field day when she found that particular acronym out, didn’t she?

So Harry’s what? 26 now? And as it is 1976, Lily’s going to be what? 16?

I assume you were going for “Commander of the Camp” when you used Google Translate or a similar site to get the Latin Phrase “Praefectus Castrorum” however if you took the time to switch the translator so that instead of translating English words into Latin, it was actually translating Latin words into English, you would have found that this phrase also translates to simply “Speculator” which is NOT what you wanted it to mean.

I assume the “Tell me. What do you know of the Order of the Phoenix?” was supposed to all be on the same line?

I look forward to seeing more of this story.
Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
You have a date drop fail. Protection of unspeakables act of 1609 couldn't exist, because the Ministry of magic wasn't established until 1703 and the various departments some time later.
ep chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
fic sympa
ClownWhosFeelnDown chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
hentai18ancilla chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Harry's making changes and causing a ruckus all at once-love it!
Haspu Bujog chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Great start.
hlyarts chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
How fun!
The UFO acronym? it an acronym? Anyway THAT was fun. Very creative

On a an American, I have the utmost respect for the military. So thank you.
D3monOfRazgr1z chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Private Jenkins this was absolutely awesome. I really hope you update soon.
Silverscale chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
I like it, feels like there's going to be a lot of interesting situations of both romance, drama and bloody carnage. :D
Isaac the grape chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Good story mate. Brilliantly well written with a strongly SHOWN character that the author has spent a fair amount of time turning into a very enjoyable 'gary stu'-esk caricature. Harry as a legitimate badarse makes for fun reading.

Very impressed with the word length as well. Not many writers can knock out a first chapter at nearly 10,000 words. Within 4 chapters you'd be reaching novella length if you ever felt like some quick re-naming and a few letters to publishing houses a la a the most infamous E. L. James.

Speaking of, no particular author comes to mind with which to give you comparative accolades but I can say I enjoy your conversational language though as a comment I'd say you do have quite the number of adjectives I'd personally deem unnecessary. Not every action needs further describing, vis a vis the words of our Lord and Savior, Elmore Lennord.

In summary, this is a great start and I look forward to more. Let us know if you need an editor. Though I can't say I can prove any great talent in the area.

preciousann chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
This is a good first chapter! I really like that the time travel angle is different than the normal 'Harry goes back in time' stories. As for parings, why muck up the story with fluffy crap? Instead of an actual paring, just have Harry be a flirty bastard. I saw that one of your other reviewers said pair him with Lily, but please, for all that is great and good in the world, please don't do that!

It would be more than a bit disturbing.

Anyway, please keep the chapters coming, and Im looking forward to the next one!
geetac chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
This is a so cool beginning.
marlastiano chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Nice :)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Why not a Lily/Harry love parring, because there is no one on fanfiction
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