Reviews for The Next Great Adventure
Alasiir The Ranger chapter 17 . 7/3
I demand an update good sir!
Shu Ouma GC chapter 1 . 10/15/2017
Please come back and update
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 17 . 10/14/2017
Another unfinish story.
WildKhaine chapter 13 . 2/20/2017
meh, story was alright but the whole pretty boy Harry Potter is getting a bit boring. Plus hearing an 11 year old say things like that is just something that comes across to me as rather stupid and not very believable. While I might see girls his age having some reaction to him, it just seems a bit off that so many older, more mature women in the story seem to want to ogle an 11 year old. It's rather creepy and have wonder if they are alittle sick in the head.
Sam chapter 17 . 12/8/2016
Just found this and loved it. Wish their was more
Guest chapter 17 . 11/22/2016
please update the story soon
Guest chapter 17 . 10/25/2016
Please update soon
Face Yourself chapter 17 . 6/29/2016
Great story, probably one of my top twenty... but it hasn't updated in over a year! :( Please say you'll get back to this one some time?
Crossxx chapter 17 . 4/30/2016
I'm loving g this story so much I can't wait for more chapters.
VizeerLord chapter 16 . 4/8/2016
Great work

More please
DJ Rodriguez chapter 17 . 2/3/2016
Now this story here has potential! Hope to see more soon! Keep it up!
leylinjan chapter 17 . 12/12/2015
I like this story!
TheChaoticOne chapter 17 . 11/30/2015
Quickly becoming one of my favorites, good work, look forward to more
Skulalien chapter 17 . 9/27/2015
Could have been a great re write if only you didn't copy most of the story and not even complete it
armahgeddon chapter 9 . 8/21/2015
you really need to work on your spelling f.e. it is Parvati Patil etc also just because you write they became much closer over months it doesnt mean that the reader sees 2 ppl suddenly be close...
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