Reviews for Break These Chains on Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! A sequel please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well they pushed him once to hard and now they have to pay the price...and I think Reborn has to pay it too I would love to read how Tsuna and the others destroy Vongola, that would be awesome 3 |
![]() ![]() I I don't don't know what to say except you touched my heart with this and I am honored to have even had the privilege to have read this. So I wanted to say thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there a squel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always admire Tsuna because of his resolve, but this didn't cross my mind. He'll certainly be a great mafia boss, but when I think about it. This story has its point. UUGGH! I don't even know what to think. Tsuna's awesome, great, and all to be a boss... But when I look at a different angle... WAKARANAIIII... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck yes a tsuna who has the balls let the fucking mafia burn finally a fanfiction that doesn't paint the mafia in rainbows and unicorns |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there a sequel for this? Because this fic is amazing! I would love to know what happens next after this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know. I half expected Tsuna to kill himself from the pressure. Or ask Reborn to kill him. I know he wouldn’t have, because Yammamoto, Ryhoei and Lambo would be taken. Mukuro would be jailed. Chrome would be left alone. Gokuderea would be stuck in Italy. And hibari would be killed. Reborns betrayal hurt a lot and I’m expecting any relationship between Tsuna and Rhodes who forced him to be a mafia boss to be discarded. I was half expecting Tsuna to break down and cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's fics like these that remind me of how much I hate drama. I actually have a similar plan like this story (completely different plot but same amount of refusal and defeat) that deals more with the past of Tsuna as the No Good kid then being forced to deal with the dangers and craziness of the Vongola, not to mention the mafia. It's centered around a suicidal Tsuna long before he met Reborn and wants to break free from the chains of his dame life and later, his Vongola life. After this story, I think I have more than enough incentive to continue writing the first chapter. Now all I need to do is think of a way to break canon while still following the timeline (coz I already have a planned one shot sequel regarding Lambo after the Varia arc that I plan on releasing earlier than the first) Anyway, I love how you wrote this really. I was crying like maybe half way through Lambo's breakdown and it just didn't stop until I reached the ending. The fact that everyone accepted Tsuna's feelings shows how much of a bond they had formed (no matter how some may never admit to it) and while it may be true that they never would have been friends if not for Reborn/Vongola (except maybe Yamamoto coz he approached Tsuna himself), the fact of the matter is that in the present, you can take away his title, his position, his famiglia, you can't take away a Sky from his guardians and vice versa. Bonds of the Flames of the Sky ran deeper than physical bonds do. Their will resonated with each other and nothing could have destroyed that. It hurts to think that while the guardians would have been fine had Tsuna still refused, Tsuna had to punch a mirror to avoid seeing what he would inevitably become to save them. He really is a Sky and one that Vongola doesn't deserve. Because of these events, Tsuna may end up hating himself and that's the one thing I truly wish he wouldn't go back to. He had found confidence in himself and his comrades and he can look in the mirror and say "i can tolerate this person". Not a lot of people in the world could do that... Thank you for writing this fic, seriously. I'd hope for a sequel (where he utterly destroys the mafia and watch it burn like that Greek story) but this open ending is more than enoughI'd love to read more of your writing Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() This is my first comment because even after all these years of reading shit this is the first time I feel that this is it. This is the ending that it should have gone to. I adore this to hell and back. Tsuna with a backbone and resolve enough to change his fate, just like how he was taught. |
![]() ![]() I don't know why Vongola ever thought it was a good idea to force someone, who clearly does reject it, to be their boss, to be someone who will lead them, unless he'll just be a figurehead. It's like thinking nothing will go wrong in their plans to put the famiglia's future in the hands of someone who will then have the power to destroy it and considering that he did not want it in the first place, well, you get the idea. It's why I never really liked the Ninth and Iemitsu(hated is more applicable here, and nope, never calling him as Tsuna's father). Like what was said in this fic, they never did what they did for Tsuna's sake but for the Vongola's. Besides, if I recall correctly, Tsuna already got permission from Primo to do what he wants, whether to let the Vongola prosper or to ruin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Konbanwa! I have a question for you. Did you ever thought of writing a sequel for this? It would be awesome. Like, you can put a poll for which direction for it to go either Tsuna succeeding or failing with Mukuro possessing his body. Then write what happens. Oh my karma, that thought is making me hyper. If you can, please do so. Ja na! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is amazing! Genius even! It's so vengeful and I like- no, I LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() much realistic one than the meh ending of KHR. Wish the manga epilogue is few years afterwards,showing the mafia wars. |