Reviews for What Will Be
RB chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
Stumbled upon your story today. It's such a pity that you abandoned it. Whilst by reviewing, I have insured myself against demons, perhaps readers' happiness may lead to angels' blessings to spur you to complete the story? :P

Even so, I rather enjoyed the journey...
LouBelle04 chapter 13 . 5/8/2012
I really enjoyed this, will there be any more?

LBx
Espied7 chapter 13 . 3/18/2012
I'm sad that you left this story; it's so fun! But thanks for what you did write :)
Espied7 chapter 9 . 3/18/2012
I loved this chapter. Demi is fiendishly clever :)
Ehann chapter 13 . 10/5/2011
It's really too bad that you stopped working on this. Because what you've written is pretty amazing. You made flesh and blood out of printed words. I would love to know how the story ends.
Miravisu chapter 13 . 12/16/2010
What a tale, I quite like Demi. Lying like that to Draco, teehee.

And what an evil longlasting cliffie!
Malfoy's Kitten chapter 13 . 3/3/2010
What? Are you kidding? Thats it?
iana chapter 13 . 3/1/2010
wah! T_T_T_T_T_T where's the next chappies!
AKEMI SHIKON chapter 13 . 2/12/2008
I rather like this story. It's a shame that you've given it up.

I really hope you update at some point in the future. You're doing a great job with it. The story, I mean.
Lifestyle chapter 13 . 12/19/2007
Wha...wha...WHAT?

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Where's the next chapter? Where is it? The END? No! It's not, I say!

Will I never know what will happen to Hermione and Snapes' relationship? Just as it's getting started?

I...I can't feel my hands. My vision! It's going blurry! My heart is racing...and my head is pounding! I can't breathe!

-reviewer hypervenilates, passes out, has grand mal seziure, foam oozes from mouth-

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Love the story, by the way ':)
l.w chapter 13 . 8/14/2007
Although I could nitpick on the spelling and grammar and the propensity of full stops, I won't 'cos I'm just as bad P

Love the story, one of the best time travelling SS/HG fics I've read. I didn't think the romance was too slow in coming, actually it's too short in my own humble opinion, but then I'm a romance angst-bunny so never mind me!

Very sad to see this abandoned so you better have a good reason for it, like you've been kidnapped to Guadalajara, or dead. (gods forbid on both, natch, but still)

Cries of "More more!" probably will do no good, but I will voice them anyway: More more! MORE!
grammar critic chapter 4 . 4/27/2007
While the basic plot has merit, the numberous grammar and spelling mistakes distract the reader. I understand accidentally adding a letter to one or two common words but leaving out whole words and spelling commonly used words wrong? That reflects a lack of integrity that makes me wonder what kind of education you received in the literary art and what the hell you're doing writing something online. Instead of inflicting your obvious deficiences on others, do try to make up for them by actually learning grammar and spelling, and read over and REVISE your stories BEFORE submitting them.
Lyssa Baby chapter 13 . 4/22/2007
OMG I loved this story it was totally awesome. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love reading stories with these two as a couple. I hate author notes dont you I mean they always get the readers hopes up you know I mean the readers think its another chapter of the story but it turns out its a author note and it just gets our hopes up which sucks. Anyway like i said before i cant wait to see what happens next.
Chrl268 chapter 13 . 2/27/2007
Aw! no more? please more? i know it's been yrs but still! more? please! you know you want to! this is so good, go demitius! go snape! go hermione! go you! yay! please more!
Nathena chapter 13 . 11/17/2006
hello,

Yes I know it's a little late to review but I found your story and I've read it up to this point and I must confess that I'm rather disappointed that it stopped. I couldn't stop hitting the arrow for next chapter I was so intrigued. If there is any way you can continue this story I would be very happy and grateful to you!

This story has become a favorite of mine and I'd love to see it continue!

Nathena
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