Reviews for If This, Then |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweet love story. So sad her mom didnt get that chnace at at happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adored this story. It's been a bit since one has kept me so captivated. Thank you for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story! I couldn't stop reading! I have only been to Canada twice. As a child to BC and to the Ottawa airport to visit friends in upper NY. Thanks for being a neighbor to me in So. Cal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start. Now on to the remainder of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved loved loved this! Thank you so very much! |
![]() ![]() I really don't know why Bella is even bothering with Edward anymore. He got back with Tanya after Bella started dating Jake. And he gave his virginity to JESSICA of all damn people, disgusting. AND he has a fucking girlfriend...again, so why in the actual fuck is Bella talking to this prick again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao that is so not the way to tell your potential future girl you broke up with your girlfriend |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely ending. Your writing style really draws you in. You never know how scenes will play out. Great fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story! I'm not into teenage drama at all (I had enough with mine back then) but this... This is gorgeous! :) Thanks so much for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that’s so sweet! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I stayed up all night reading this story! Every time I tried to put it down to sleep I just started right back up again. I love it! I love the way this was written. You put me right back in high school, the feelings were so real! I tore through it so quickly that I am going to read it again so that I can savor it this time. So we’ll done, thank you! |
![]() ![]() What a wonderful and instructive story! But I need more, more, more... Please write a sequel. You're a very talented writer! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so glad these two Finally realized what they were to each other. Bella overcame a lot, rape manipulating boys and settling...well they both did a bit of settling. Glad that’s over. ha! I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your writing style! I appreciate how realistic your characters are and they have fallout from their issues and behavior. |