Please update this story again soon, it is very good.

more I say continue.

Hope to read more soon.

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I can't wait to read more of this!

Good start so far. But at least run the story through a spell check before posting. Reading this was very frustrating due to various grammatical and spelling errors. Anyway hoping for a great story.

You use i Instead of I and you for one reason or another capitalize Harry but not Potter, and not voldemort and a number of other basic mistakes other wise its pretty well written for the most part.

you should probably get a beta. the grammer gave me a headache

Your grammar needs some work.
And why are you breaking up the paragraphs?
The story is good, you just need to improve a bit, or write it in Microsoft Word.

Can't wait for the next chapter
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sweet

looks good so far like the boon aspect instead of just dying and a menu screen popping up.
for a potential boon would be magic accepting relatives or even a relative line that contacts Petunia looking for lily who is accepting of magic that takes in Harry. This would give you some creative new ground to work with for any ID fields that Harry could access.i.e. park - bullies, graveyard - zombies, forest - animals and each zone can level up compared to the manga version of ID fields.