Reviews for Father
Rain chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
It's really good. All the internsl turmoil of Sarada has been beautifully captured.
Please don't let it be a one-shot!
Keep writing! _
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
uuuu rrrrrrr deeeee beeeeesstt :D update PlZZZZzZ (wish i could write more than one review lol ) keep it up! great job *thumbsup*
anglmukhii chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Wow. Just wow. Yeah I really loved this. It's a good representation of Sarada's inner most thoughts and her own feelings. Good job!
suigetsusass chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Damn, my feels. I loved it anyway. Sarada is so fascinating it's hard to feel bored reading her thoughts
asianbadass101 chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
forgot to log into my account there -.- buuut at least i wrote more than one review :D (the unkown review was mine :P ) oh yeah and good job and keep it up!
fanofthisfiction chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Good capture on inner the inner thought of Sarada in Naruto Gaiden. The chapter was able to sum off most of what's been divulged and give some feeling to it in the process. The third person passage was a good way to convey her feelings too.