|Reviews for Jiraiya's True Pupil|
| Langas chapter 13 . 2/6
| Kingkong101 chapter 13 . 2/4
Little bitch naruto
| DenizenOfApocrypha chapter 13 . 1/31
just finished and love the story so far. would love to see more in the future and I hope your muse continues to inspire you.
| Oblivion168 chapter 1 . 1/26
Ok this chapter was to funny, especially the clones. I wait the day they are planning to revolt.
| bloodlinenaruto chapter 13 . 1/24
update ? please must have more shiznaru
| kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 13 . 1/14
| Dark Dragon Tamer chapter 4 . 1/11
I'll say this once: why do you use 'of' instead of 'have'? It's very annoying!
| Oddballzebra chapter 3 . 11/21/2017
| LordofTerror chapter 6 . 10/17/2017
that was stupid way to make naruto forfeit like that.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/17/2017
This is very bad writing...
| rising1 chapter 13 . 10/15/2017
Brilliant! Strong, but not OP Naruto.
| Jose19 chapter 13 . 10/14/2017
I actually like this pairing a great deal this woman was turned down in the original story and dismissed because Naruto at the time was completely focused on Sakura whom I dislike a great deal.
I don't understand why she hasn't been taken to Konoha yet because if she is his girlfriend then why it hasn't happened.
| Blackjaqk23 chapter 3 . 9/30/2017
Whoa, whoa, whoa, nearing 17? the Forth Great War ended when he was 17. Damm.
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2017
to be honest this chapter actually sucks, seriously a bijuu in heat they are chakra made being not ordnary animals
| marquis.shax chapter 13 . 9/1/2017
you need to update this story it's been way to long