Reviews for Lyall
timijaf chapter 14 . 10/3/2016
Great chapter
shugokage chapter 13 . 9/9/2016
Wow amazing job on this chapter and scene!
timijaf chapter 13 . 9/1/2016
Great chapter
timijaf chapter 12 . 8/2/2016
Great chapter
dogsrulz77 chapter 11 . 6/4/2016
PLEASE UPDATE THIS FANFIC IS SO AWESOME AND AMAZING!
timijaf chapter 11 . 5/29/2016
Great chapter can't wait for next one
orlha chapter 8 . 12/15/2015
I think you lost me at the last part... ︿ didnt know what or who was talking there after she got hit...
kai-bloodphoenix chapter 7 . 11/13/2015
WOOOOO! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE~
kai-bloodphoenix chapter 6 . 9/27/2015
I love it! this is awesome, can you please update?!
Really chapter 5 . 7/29/2015
Ok nice story but chapter 4 and 5 are the same chapter just repeated
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