| Reviews for Web of Lies |
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   Finnspa23 chapter 40 . 1/29 Just how small is Harry? 4 feet? 5 feet? It's very strange to have adults carrying him around. Even for an AU this is a weird one lol |
| Finnspa23 chapter 13 . 1/29 Really odd how much you have a 150 man love putting a 15 year old on his lap. There's a difference between affection and just straight up pedo behavior. |
| Finnspa23 chapter 2 . 1/29 He should get a healer lol |
| rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 8/23/2021 "his small, tired body trembling with the effort of moving" - Geez, Harry is really swimming in angst here. If this story is set the summer after the Triwizard Tournament, then isn't he about to turn 15? Infantalizing him to this degree would seem pretty icky even when he was 11. |
| firewolf chapter 39 . 6/9/2021 how do beta readers contact you? Just curious... |
| Firewolf chapter 38 . 6/9/2021 Thanks Vinnie! Also, way to go madame pomfrey! |
| Firewolf chapter 33 . 6/9/2021 ROFL |
| firewolf chapter 32 . 6/9/2021 love the snake, wish I could speak it. |
| Firewolf chapter 30 . 6/9/2021 What about the scar makeup? Would it not have washed away? |
| FireWolf chapter 25 . 6/9/2021 Why did you choose the name Star Polaris? |
| FireWolf chapter 22 . 6/9/2021 YOU DESERVE IT! I cant believe snape is so soft, you are doing an amazing job! I know I have been MIA the last few chapters, but I was to engaged with the story to review... |
| FireWolf chapter 17 . 6/9/2021 You know, in your sequel, I wrote 2 reviews under the name Anonymous...These are my first ever reviews... |
| FireWolf chapter 15 . 6/9/2021 I love seeing Snape's soft side! Maybe tell minerva so she can see it too... |
| FireWolf chapter 13 . 6/9/2021 Still, you could speed up the plot development and increase tension with suspicions. |
| FireWolf chapter 10 . 6/9/2021 Hey, love your work.. |