Reviews for Web of Lies
rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 8/23/2021
"his small, tired body trembling with the effort of moving" - Geez, Harry is really swimming in angst here. If this story is set the summer after the Triwizard Tournament, then isn't he about to turn 15? Infantalizing him to this degree would seem pretty icky even when he was 11.
firewolf chapter 39 . 6/9/2021
how do beta readers contact you? Just curious...
Firewolf chapter 38 . 6/9/2021
Thanks Vinnie!
Also, way to go madame pomfrey!
Firewolf chapter 33 . 6/9/2021
firewolf chapter 32 . 6/9/2021
love the snake, wish I could speak it.
Firewolf chapter 30 . 6/9/2021
What about the scar makeup? Would it not have washed away?
FireWolf chapter 25 . 6/9/2021
Why did you choose the name Star Polaris?
FireWolf chapter 22 . 6/9/2021
YOU DESERVE IT! I cant believe snape is so soft, you are doing an amazing job! I know I have been MIA the last few chapters, but I was to engaged with the story to review...
FireWolf chapter 17 . 6/9/2021
You know, in your sequel, I wrote 2 reviews under the name Anonymous...These are my first ever reviews...
FireWolf chapter 15 . 6/9/2021
I love seeing Snape's soft side! Maybe tell minerva so she can see it too...
FireWolf chapter 13 . 6/9/2021
Still, you could speed up the plot development and increase tension with suspicions.
FireWolf chapter 10 . 6/9/2021
Hey, love your work..
FireWolf chapter 8 . 6/9/2021
Reviewed to let you know that I haven't croaked yet...I love the cliffhanger - but where is ron, hermione, and hedwig?
FireWolf chapter 4 . 6/9/2021
FireWolf chapter 3 . 6/9/2021
I know you probably made these along time ago, but still - your writing expertise would only have improved...Please continue this!
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