|Reviews for Web of Lies|
| ImperfectWarrior chapter 9 . 7/6/2014
Wow porto temps llegint les teves histories i ara m'entero de que ets de Catalunya! Ara que ho se, deixaré caure algun review en català per aquí! Per cert, m'encanten les teves histories!
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/19/2014
Egads, the number of times Dumbledore used the name 'Child' in the first 13 chapters is ridiculous.
| FandomNutter chapter 34 . 4/28/2014
Everyone seems to have a fettish for Harry's hair; they keep ruffling it . . .
| MattKennedy chapter 41 . 3/16/2014
Awesome! Love this story so much :D
| alicewiggles chapter 23 . 3/13/2014
which 18 Harry's or Alec's
| SakuraKoi chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 2 . 2/8/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Oh no Harry
| BeLlIxiEs chapter 41 . 1/23/2014
i had an amazing time readin this one.
off to read the next one
| jadedquartz chapter 41 . 12/31/2013
This is good.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
I am enjoying this story, it is very entertaining. Thank you!
BTW, if you will forgive an on the fly Brit pick; in this chapter Dumbledore uses the word 'anyways', however no British person ever adds an 's' to the word 'anyway', anyone saying 'anyways'
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/31/2013
I am enjoying this story, it is very entertaining. Thank you! It is nice too, to read a fanfic with a good Dumbledore for a change.
BTW, if you will forgive an on the fly Brit pick; in this chapter Dumbledore uses the word 'anyways', however no British person ever adds an 's' to the word 'anyway', it sounds very odd to British ears. Anyone saying 'anyways' would immediately identify himself as a foreigner, probably an American.
| Priya Ashok chapter 41 . 12/18/2013
Good story. Thank you.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
I have to say , I read the whole thing, and I had a few issues. First of all, under fed or not, Harry is 15. They said he's short in the book, but even if his growth hormones had been suppressed somehow, I can't see him looking 11 without some help...a de-aging potion maybe? They could pass him off as a very TALL 11 year old, but a normal 11 year old...yeah, not seeing it when he fit in with the 15-year-olds just fine in his 5th year. I do like what you've done to Snape for the most part (although I think it was a bit fast) but I would have liked to see some more inner conflict from Dumbledore at the beginning. He seemed to accept such things easily when he was so adamant in the books and he knew at least SOME of what was going on. I can see him not realizing to what extent and all, but again, I think we need to see more inner conflict.
Also, I know that when someone has traumatic experiences that their emotional age is frozen until they can deal with whatever trauma happened, but I'd like to see a bit more of that explained here. Harry is 15 and being carried around like a 5-year-old. I can see it if you point out that Harry needs to learn what it's like to be a child before he can grow into a healthy adult because otherwise...it's just really hard to swallow, you know?
I will still read the second story, and I think it's an interesting (and unique) premise, so please don't think I hated it, but I just had a hard time with some of the more important details.
| Theblackbook chapter 14 . 7/21/2013
haha, awsome. Though you have a tendency to "over-write" certain parts and explanations.