Reviews for Pygmalion
KristieRoxie chapter 42 . 6/26
What poetic justice (well maybe justice) that Vincent is trailing after Idunn blankly while saying "I love my job" just like the muggles he impeurised
Megan Cheang chapter 27 . 5/15
I'm guessing Sirius and Remus were not part of the discussion on why Harry and Neville had joined Tom. I can't see them not voicing their worries about Hermione or defending her against Molly's insult.
I don't think Ginny thought this through. Learning occlumency is one thing, participating in forbidden rituals to prove she is interested in joining the death eaters is another.
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno chapter 42 . 5/11
oh my gods, idk if I feel bad for Crabbe or not. I mean, it's terrible but so was he so...
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno chapter 28 . 5/11
Obviously I knew they weren't going to be good people but I thought Hermione would have stronger feelings on the slavery thing. She draws the line at elves but not imperiused muggles? XD
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno chapter 26 . 5/11
I feel bad for Drqco. He's been a little pathetic though he's definitely getting better. It was kind of nice seeing him develop loyalty to Hermione on his own too.
TheBloodyLoveOfSakuraHaruno chapter 14 . 5/11
Tomione is normally not my thing but I regret nothing XD Unlike Ron, who I'm sure is regretting a lot lol.
Marriah Edwards chapter 57 . 4/17
This was a fantastic read!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9
amazing story!

pls cross post on ao3
pwrmom2 chapter 57 . 3/11
Absolutely loved this. It’s an axing how you were able to make us vote for the bad guys. You groomed us just like Tom groomed his people…lol. Absolutely amazing!
maiqsmail chapter 55 . 3/6
Who is Victor Crabbe though? Seems a mistake?
maiqsmail chapter 8 . 3/5
Ya'know, maybe I'm overestimating how unusual magical accidents are in Wizard world, but shouldn't Tom be prodded and examined by Dept of Mysteries because of his spontaneous time travel? Come to think of this, shouldn't he also be nervous that he might time jump in the middle of his plans again any time he steps through the door?
The idea is not new, by the way, is this a Planescape torment reference?
maiqsmail chapter 4 . 3/4
Oh dear Merlin, I just swallowed 4 chapters in one sitting and realised I should probably leave a review before I forget.

Slytherin manipulations?
Hermione Granger's elevation?
Portraying Riddle as something deeper than chaotic evil BBEG?
Subtle romantics?
Sorry not focused on golden trio?

[] Yes to all of the above!

Sign me the heck up, let's goooo!
All it needs on top of what I've read so far to be even better is more details about and variety of used magic (including "Dark" magic) and eventual relocation of game field from Hogwarts hallways to wizarding politics.
Diving back in...
persnicketyfics chapter 21 . 12/29/2022
I'm not the biggest Tomione shopper, but instead your Riddle-Veela story and was intrigued (and really, I've read most of your other fics multiple times by now and loved them, especially The Green Girl, so...why not?)

holy. crap.

Hermione's ooc in The Green Girl is nothing compared to this fic and your progression from Hermione (in a world where Harry isn't a savior) to...Dark!Hermione is really well laid out. It's also interesting to see the little changes in young Tom (though he is definitely still Evil!Tom). I'm up way past my bedtime, otherwise I would just keep reading til dawn. looking forward to the rest of the story.

btw, Tom's inner monologue is just genius. I love that we get evil-villain-monologuing throughout.
lellyweird chapter 57 . 12/14/2022
This story is AMAZING! This will definitely be one I come back to read over and over. Fantastically written
MotekElm chapter 42 . 11/7/2022
OMG, the last line here is so perfect. brings it full circle
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