Very good

jesus fuck the grammar is so bad

Hot

Did she destroy the map?

Please update soon

lol, its getting a bit ridiculous. especially the body contortions

that was super hot

Shame this wasnt completed excellently smut and intresting story

To whom it may consern,

I am a (zir/ze), I love harry potter, slightly mentally ill.

This fanfic truely opened my third eye, so much so I desided to share with my senior classes that I teach at a school.

Fanfictions are a way of sharing new ideas in ways not expressed before, its the pinical of human creative. The fanficiton in response was truely amazing and I never felt such a deep connection to the human experience.

The emphises on sound deeply resonated within my soul with the beutiful use of ONOMATOPOEIA as Lavender express 'deep moans' as she trys to escape from harry lips. The tense nature of the story brings out suductive side of human nature never thought to be exposed by use mortal beings. This story reminds of another called 'past the shallows' as it shares the stigma behind rough and tough play amount love ones.

Overall this story truely sank deep in my lovely heart 8/10. also again I am mental ill so really 10/10.

is this dead?

Nice

I loved! Update soon please! 3333333333333333333333333

Two months of constant insults? There's literally a week between the champion selection (Halloween) and the first task. What are you on about there being two months of insults and weeks worth of training time? Did you not actually read book 4, and only get your information from fanfics? I guess if you're just writing smut for its own sake it doesn't matter, but in that case you don't even need the trappings of Harry Potter. You clearly don't grasp the source material, and with everyone being OOC and the timeline munged and so on this is more distracting than it's worth. Skip!

"his womanhood" this author is a joke.

this author keeps mixing genders. is he an idiot.