Reviews for Harry the Playboy
Xuln chapter 13 . 5/27/2016
I'm not going to say that you shouldn't remove the past chapters, but the content that they held are just too good to be completely thrown out. You should implement the the character type and scenes from Hermione, Cho, Fleur, Parvati and Patil, and also Pansy. They really gave a supple element to the story.
anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 13 . 5/27/2016
good hope for more wot a bot a female harry store the same as this one
Xuln chapter 9 . 5/27/2016
Besides the general skill of writing in English, this version was very entertaining.
major wallace chapter 13 . 5/26/2016
nice work
Arrow in knee chapter 13 . 5/26/2016
can't wait to see Susan and Fleur in next chapter
alec-potter chapter 13 . 5/26/2016
Fantastic chapter. Hope you update the Multiverse story too on some other site.
mattcun chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
i cant wait to see the next chapter
ShadowRose8055 chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
Holy shit this chapter was good! Keep up the amazing work!
flame55 chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
This is great
Mumig chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
Really nice story, I like it :)
Mystolon chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
Interesting Chapter This rewrite is becoming better than the original I'm enjoying that there's more focus on the women individually and the pace of the timing is better the original felt a bit rushed and crammed into 1 chapter

I'm looking forward to seeing if Harry targets Susan to seduce after what happened in this chapter maybe with Hannah

I've noticed something and it's got me wondering During this rewrite when Harry ejaculates most of the time he pulls out of the lady. I've got to ask why does he keep doing that I didn't think anyone did that anymore since the invention of protection
TOWTWUKER chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
Need to remember to read this at night and not 2:30 in the afternoon...
Roland Tepes chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.
Shiro981 chapter 13 . 5/25/2016
grear chapter i wait for one more
Shiro981 chapter 12 . 5/25/2016
another chapter please
great story
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