Reviews for Luke and Riley: An Unlikely Romance
Guest chapter 4 . 7/20/2015
don't listen to AJ it is a fanfiction after all and btw i am 19 and besides little kids know nothing about sex they don't even know what fanfiction is sweetie just keep writing and be yourself don't listen to the haters
Guest chapter 4 . 7/20/2015
yes luke and riley should have unprotected sex and riley gets pregnant and starts a lot of drama

*this is your conscience speaking*
AJ chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
Also for everyone asking for a sex scene they are young kids what the hell is wrong with you I get that the feels take control sometimes but hell no, no sex scene it just isn't OK on and are you kidding me right now, again not trying to be an ass but who the fudge says I love you on the phone after literally just freaking meeting, unless they have talked for months over the phone but were far apart
AJ chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
As adorable of a relationship as this is, this just isn't how it works and I am not trying to hate or anything I just don't think they would instantly want to kiss each other I mean sure if I was doing that I would want to to but I doubt the girl would be so open you know again no hate great story so far just not ultra realistic but I can get over it sorry for being a douchebag if I came across as one I am enjoying your story and I hope you continue to do this and aren't negatively affected by my comments I just always have to voice my opinion.
hinnyjoanne100 chapter 4 . 7/18/2015
This is so good, please update soon!
Cupcakes crazy chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
I'm not to sure about that as long as the rating stays teen then mabey not to sure
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2015
I do think that you should do a chapter that contains Riley and Luke having Sex. I just kinda feel like something like that should happen. It would make the story even more awesome than it already is! (;
Guest chapter 4 . 7/13/2015
I think you should have a chapter where Riley and Luke have sex. (;
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2015
this chapter was really steamy do i smell a sex scene please say yes
Guest chapter 2 . 7/10/2015
love keep writing please
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
more please
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2015
update soon please
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Plz update this story it's great so far :))
theausllyrucasgirl chapter 2 . 5/29/2015
I just love this, and I ship Riley and Luke so hard, but I also ship Riley and Lucas! I don't know what to do! ;)
FieryCaptainSpiderSanta chapter 3 . 5/27/2015
Haha, I can't wait to find out who 'Anonymous' is. Please update soon!
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