Fucking Merlin… From Morgan it’s horrific, but expected. From Merlin… That cut deep.

Love the interactions between Emiya and Arturia.

I can’t tell if it’s because, 1.) it’s so late/early that my brain isn’t working right, or 2.) I only vaguely remember the fate/stay anime, but this crap is so hard to comprehend I may as well be reading Old English. Not to say it isn’t fascinating, because it is. I have enough context to know that: EMIYA is alternate future Shirou, Alaya or whatever their name is, is the spirit of the world, and that Saber is asking for a second chance. That bring said the usage of alternate terminology for the same thing is tripping me up just as much as how vague and convoluted Alaya’s thought process is.

still hoping that one day it will be continued, damn. such a good story from you two

Incredibly high quality work. What's more, it's unfortunate that it's unfinished.

who is the real mc in this fanfiction if it's emiya he's like an extra character not giving away whatever

Gah, I just hope can you writing

And then, after years of imprisonment, he strikes. He kills the kings' two boy sons, fashioning their skulls into drinking cups for the king, their eyes into jeweled brooches for the queen, and their teeth into a necklace for their sister the princess. Next, he rapes and impregnates the princess, possibly drugging her first. Finally, having build a magical/mechanical set of wings for an escape by flight, he taunts the King with full knowledge of his vengeance, cruelly gloating, before flying to freedom.

….Jesus Christ man, I get it, you were severely wronged,…but that’s a tad bit too far getting people who aren’t involved into this because their related to the king

This was an awesome read. I hope that someday we can read the whole story. Its made me wonder if after this EMIYA can be summoned under the identity of Archer Farran to the grail wars and what would his legend be. (He’d probably be recorded as part fae if he doesn’t get revealed as a CG. XD)

Bruh...please update.

“ He spent a good hour last night telling Gawain what that meant: mental and emotional fidelity to one lover, with physical chastity before marriage, and physical faithfulness to a wife alone after he was married.”

Minor nitpick here - chastity isn’t just celibacy outside of marriage, it’s refraining from sexual acts. A husband who regularly sleeps with his wife is just as chaste as any monk.

This is such a hard chapter to be left hanging on a cliff with.

Still. I hold hope that it will be updated once more one day.

The story you two made is great. I hope you choose to start it up again one day, because you left it on quite the cliffhanger

Shit what a cliffhanger on chapter 11! Hope this will be finished someday or at least give us an outline.

Been stuck in this cliffhanger for over 4 years now. Still eagerly awaiting this story’s continuation.