Bravo. Amazing. I have no doubt that this will go far.

Also, I will be using your definition of how to ascend to the Throne of Heroes permanently. Very thorough and detailed.

Hmmmmm...A Potential Epic Story...*Gendo Pose* Continue.

This story shows a great deal of promise! Please update!

This looks promising.

The infodump at the beginning explaining your version of Alaya was a bit dry and boring to read. I would suggest splitting it up and posting parts of it at the beginning of each chapter. That way, the readers don't really know what's going on and get bits and pieces of the rules of Alaya as we read each chapter.

This is similar to how in Death Note or Attack on Titan where the rules of the world are shown briefly during an anime episode.