This story is soo good!

Please come back and update this one, it’s a fantastic story and left at an awesome cliffhanger! ️

No no no no, not a honeypot.
In my home, we use that term for only two things. The least insulting of which being a computer mechanism.

Dear God I demand you stop. If you keep this up I'm going to fall in love with Neville Longbottom. Gah, and I thought Hermione was cute. The way you write characters makes me want to hate less things.

Loony is the ultimate lech at all ages, and Sirius is just a cover.
Change my mind

this is like the fifth time ive read this story and i still lol every time at the end of this chapter

My God, the death of the dementors would have looked stunning on screen.

Neville is a legend, fact.

Wow. With a living uncle, Harry can be more like a kid pulling pranks. The war will ruin that, of course...

I love this! I have never read anything where the Slytherins willingly team up with Gryffindors without sounding contrived!

It's so much more satisfying that Cormac got attacked by Hermione's birds.

Yes! I love to see Gryffindors sticking up for one another, and a confident Neville. This chapter also made me realise the other Gryffindors don't know about Hermione punching Malfoy, do they? I always thought that a missed opportunity in the books, so thanks for making it a reality!

Snape burning his book is an interesting twist to the story!

Ooh, what a cliff-hanger!

Fred and George are just magnificent! You nailed their personalities.