Darn. Dipper is way too observant with Danny in these fics for my liking in protection of Danny.

Real smooth Danny. You know, you should just fake scream now so Dipper doesn't get all suspicious. Really. Oh well, click.

BOO? Yeah DP, that ain't going to work with this kid. Dipper, go and uh, pretend this encounter never happened.

I have to ask though why is danny's ghost sense leading to the vending machine? I get it leads to this nerd lab with stuff but I'm pretty sure there ain't any big enourmos amounts of ectoism down there. Oh well, this IS YOUR story.

I would think Jazz would be all logic like with the town name being Gravity Falls since gravity cannot fall but eh, who knows? Ghosts are real and everything in the Ghost Zone defies all phyics so maybe gravity CAN fall.

Are you still updating this story? It's SO GOOD!

TENSION!

Wtf is this? It's not even a chapter?

Oh... Oh my gosh. OH MY GOSH.

and now things just got a little more complicated...

Are you kidding? This crossover is amazing! Please please don't take forever in updating! Only cause I don't wanna wait!

You did a great job with this story. All of the character are in character and the way they interact is interesting. Keep posting chapters!

Your writing is getting better and despite its shortness this chapter was well done. I'm sure you'll fin a way to make this story work,. I'm looking forward to how it turns out :)
Just write it'll come together -

Bloop! I like it!

AHHHH NO! CLIFFHANGER! Update soon! please!

I really am glad you updated. Looking forward to see what happens next!