|Reviews for And We Have Sinned|
| alr14 chapter 7 . 4/15/2012
this story has kept me up all night. creepy right? but still totally worth the read.. i was just curious to see if you had any plans to continue even finishing this story?
| ParanomalLove chapter 7 . 12/12/2010
Your creepy...just joking. But the child, scary. I was wondering how you could depict a child as a monster. It just give me another thought of having kids. I mean, this is real horror. i was wondering if you ever thought about becoming a published author, despite a few errors, i think it will be a wonderful story.
| Ragnell chapter 7 . 10/15/2010
I was caught up with your interesting plot and felt a terrible disappointment when I realized the story had been abandoned. It is a true shame.
| rosemarie17 chapter 7 . 9/9/2009
| Miss Rosie Real chapter 7 . 2/26/2007
Quite possibly one of the most frightening things I have ever read. Besides Misery (an actual book). This is... ugh, scary! Everything about it. Your writing is amazing, you must know! I'm absolutely freezing right now, there's not telling how many times I have shivered reading this.
Hermione/Draco love is very well spread out, not overbearing but still significant. Lucius is one of the most interesting characters in my opinion, as well as his and Narcissa's relationship. Am I a hopeless romantic to think that he may have had the faintest trace of love for his wife? He's obviously not the cuddliest guy in the world, but at least he has the ability to be disgusted by some of Voldemort's plans and... creations. Although thhe whole sacrificing his wife to Voldemort sort of smashes my hope...
Desdemona is going to give my nightmares. *groans in terror* She is positively creepy! She is The Omen child times ten! The Ring girl times a thousand! Will you kill her? Please? *pleads*
Alright. She's not real. Just keeping repeating that.
*hides under blankets* I really am cold right now. But this story's addicting.
I'll be looking for updates! Don't be too discouraged by typos, they're bound to happen. At least you acknowledge them.
Waiting impatiently for an update,
| Jenn Hoffmann chapter 6 . 1/2/2007
Wow...this story is amazing! Some of these chapters must've taken you forever to write! There's so much detail, and thought that's apparently gone into each chapter. I really enjoy reading this story, and look forward to reading more!Jenn
| Lucifer-the-great-undead chapter 6 . 9/23/2006
this fic is very unique. i've never read a plot like this before. the characters live a very painful life. but overall very intriguing.
| cadance chapter 7 . 7/10/2006
This is such an awesome story! Very creative and engaging. The demon kid seriously gives me the creeps .
| sara chapter 4 . 6/28/2006
im pretty sure this is based off of beauty and the beast - i mean i love the story nontheless but the whole library scene was a little bit too much
| cucu4cocopuffs chapter 6 . 6/26/2006
I know you havn't updated in years but I hope you do, no matter how insignificant my faith may be. Your story is extremely enchanting and it would be sad if it didn't have a proper ending.
| PurpleRose44 chapter 7 . 5/29/2006
Wow...this story is deep. I hope you update soon
| Broken Robot Dreams chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
That was really GOOD!OMG!
| Memorial.Address chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
Love it. Keep writing.
| Bre chapter 7 . 3/24/2006
This is an absolutely amazing story. You are an excellent writer and this story is magnificent. It is a wonderful gift when you can make your readers cry tears of sorrow and of happiness so seemlessly. I can but wish that one day my writing skills will reach the same level as yours. You should not worry about being egotistical - you have a wonderful story and you should be proud! Bravo, and update soon.
| carolinesegment chapter 7 . 1/6/2006
damn it! i just spent the better half of my day reading this and it was so good! possibly the most original of all fanfics i've read. as original as fanfics can get. and holy crud! the last update was in '04? nearly 2 years! i've also read a couple of your other fics, The Definition of Insanity has to be my favourite, though i mostly just skip the sex bits. i tend to be immature when it comes to that. anyways, i hope that you decide to update someday soon otherwise i might go insane trying to figure out what the hell happens next.
oh, and just one thing that was bugging me. i noticed that often in your fics you use 'then' in instances where it was grammatically incorrect. when you are comparing things, for example:
"There WAS something more beautiful then this place, and she never would have believed it before."
it should be: "mor beautiful THAN this place"
i don't know if it was just a slip up but i noticed that you do it a lot.
even so, i love your fics and hope that you update sometime in the near future.