Reviews for Retribution
Lady Ramona chapter 1 . 5/28
Ok I must be a bad and twisted person. I liked this one, it shows more of the true nature of what the dark side of the Major is.
Well done, thank you!
Adirondackmommi chapter 1 . 3/15
Well damn...
lazygirl89 chapter 1 . 1/30
Wow that was disturbing, poor Bella being killed by jasper because of the Cullen when she was abandoned too. Will you ever consider writing a crossover sequel to this where Bella becomes an original vampire and seeks vengeance by destroying jasper after he finds true happiness and love. I like the idea of a dark, powerful Bella, maybe pair her with either kol or klaus who would love and encourage her darkness, if not then fair enough but I'm hoping you do
Brandi Neri chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
well shit
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Disturbing.
Espied7 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Whoa dang.
bluegirl27262 chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
well she died... lol
andrewpine chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
Well that was different.
catjumped11 chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
kind of sad but a realistic ending.
LadyEveangeline chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
wait... What? OMG so cruel I love it...
TiffaniW chapter 1 . 5/26/2015
That's f'd up. But I liked it. Poor Jake though.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
Seems too dark for me. But good luck on your story!
dixiechickie chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
Well now, that was sickening...wonder what Alice thinks about that~~or is that it? Did Alice kick him out as well as the rest of the family? Jasper, Jasper tsk tsk.
kinnik chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
So good!
klaroline.makaylasotp chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
I like it...but I'm guessing it's only a one shot, right?
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