|Reviews for Chiaroscuro|
| Above A1l chapter 1 . 10/30
O shit I have work in an hour but…
| montanoaries9 chapter 3 . 10/30
didn't get past chapter 3 the rambling of shikamaru for every detail is annoying as hell
| The Extraordinarii chapter 75 . 10/28
Damn shame it didn't get finished. I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Thank you
| OtakuJunior chapter 42 . 10/24
what s an obito?
I really honestely feel so much hate for u right now.
How could you not know of the not so well known bird species that is native to japan and distant cousins of crows.
| ankitarya2301 chapter 1 . 10/17
a strong beginning and new concept too.
| Lord Vaserious chapter 2 . 10/16
Kakashi is my favourite asshole
| Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 10/16
| Noy chapter 75 . 10/15
... Really ?
You think that taking chakra away would be a good thing ?
I couldn't disagree more, with chakra the fighting and death would mostly concern the trained shinobis, now that chakra is out of the way, the feudal lords can simply armed their peasants with wooden pike and send them to war, the deathtole is going to skyrocket.
As for the end of child soldiers, well you are going to have a nasty surprise because I can assure you that a child can be taught to hold a wooden pike too so there is no reason not to use them. Historically children have always been used in war so I don't see why the elemental nations would suddently stop. You can expect the deathtole among children to skyrocket too.
Sorry but your plan is even more foolish than canon akatsuki's plan and has even less chance of achieving any kind of peace.
It's going to be medieval style bloodbath.
| RStreighart chapter 48 . 10/14
Gaara's hug scene was fuggen adorable! The story is chock full of great moments like that though!
| Agastopian chapter 19 . 10/11
I’m loving this story. I was always confused why they kept assembling Team Seven into something that fundamentally does. not. work. Yeah they had the Sanin but one turned into a creepy traitor, the other a perverted drifter, and the last a drunk gambling addict who herself also left the village for a period. Your version makes way better sense.
| Jisk chapter 75 . 10/4
Just saw the final update. Sad to hear you're not going to finish it, but this is a lot better than nothing.
Unfortunately, while the fight scenes I can piece together in my head and get a satisfying if vague mental image, the big pivots like Shikamaru's sacrifice and how the world changes are a lot harder to see without your writing selling it. If you ever feel like fleshing out those, I would appreciate it very much.
But even so, thanks for the ride! It was great while it lasted.
| ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 75 . 9/29
I called it with the whole Danzo/Kakashi mind-fuckery!
Overall, this was a really well thought out story. I'm sad that you weren't able to finish it, but I am ever so grateful for the fact that you wrote out an extremely detailed outline of how you want the story to go. It gave me a great sense of closure :D Wonderful work!
| ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 70 . 9/29
My prediction is that Danzo is using Kakashi as an unknowing pawn. There seems to be a mental block and he feels like he doesn't deserve the title of Homage...my guess is a Sharingan (Kotoamatsukami) induced order.
Also, Hinata is a badass in this chapter!
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/29
I am so happy that gaara is joining konoha, I'm gonna riot if he and naruto won't become friends. And I really like how you portray kakashi
| Soraslove chapter 58 . 9/24
Ahh of course one of danzo's cunts are at the rescue.