Reviews for Unstoppable Force
MarkedPariah chapter 27 . 4/20
Ha I like this depiction of Armaster such a good chapter. I think a lot of writers like to portray him rather poorly due to his inherently awful social skills. But with this chapter out shows growth.
Sdarian chapter 17 . 12/30/2017
How is Gallant hovering when they meet up at the Boardwalk? Or flying over a building? Nothing he has, powers or armor, lets him fly in any way.
Kateri87 chapter 53 . 12/26/2017
Gahhhh! You can't stop here! Please don't tell me this story is dead on a cliffhanger!
Guest chapter 52 . 12/10/2017
"overestimated the conversation efficiency." conversion
"dynokinetic " dynakinetic
Guest chapter 51 . 12/10/2017
" sheer enom " not finding any definitions for 'enom'
Guest chapter 49 . 12/10/2017
"not one to brad. " brag
Guest chapter 46 . 12/10/2017
"marijana" marijuana
"You held you ow" your
"ecolocation" echolocation
Guest chapter 45 . 12/10/2017
"one addition they shared." addiction
"going rouge?" rogue
"she didn't have anything she could effect." affect
"Braumann." Baumann
Guest chapter 44 . 12/10/2017
Corrections offered without malice.
" a guy name Clockblocker." named
"A blond?" Fi asked,ยป blonde?"
" try to wander discretely down the street " discreetly
Guest chapter 43 . 12/10/2017
"publically" publicly
Guest chapter 42 . 12/10/2017
"flaunting the rules" flouting
"Triumvent" Triumvirate
"lightening storm." lightning
"with his exhale." exhalation. (Exhale is not a noun.)
Guest chapter 41 . 12/10/2017
Corrections offered without malice.
"wavers" waivers
"shined" shone
"an CT" a
Guest chapter 40 . 12/10/2017
I like the plan. Damn browser kept eating my review, though.
Corrections offered without malice.
circular route" circuitous
"Troups poured out, e" troops
"regularly sparing against Gallant, " sparring
Guest chapter 38 . 12/10/2017
"subtly of her costume" subtlety
Guest chapter 37 . 12/10/2017
Corrections offered without malice.
"pouring over everything they knew" poring
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