Reviews for A house elf of a muggle family
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 4 . 4/16
Well Snape is a horrible person. I thought he was horrible in the book but this? Bullying an abused kid? Wtf is wrong with him? What kind of monster does that? Harry is right, Snape is just as bad as Petunia. Snape doesn’t even need to be nice, he just needs to not bully a 15 year old boy. I rather take James or Dudley. Sure they were bullies but at least they were bullies to people the same age of them as well as leaving it in the past. Snape can’t say either of those things. I’m sorry for ranting but it’s just not right. I did like the rest of your story, I just find Snape to be a monster of a human being
Guest chapter 8 . 2/3
Wow, this story turned whiny. I hope it picks up, an Harry dose something other than whine about his past. You also need to edit your story. A lot of your punctuation is incorrect.
gleefan2009 chapter 10 . 1/15
love it please write more
Guest chapter 10 . 1/3
Hey, are you planning on continuing this story? Because it's friggin good
Mari Wollsch chapter 10 . 12/23/2017
great, why is you story coplete in the middle? xxxxxxxxxx
jflamewalker chapter 10 . 12/13/2017
Either sack your beta, or get one. Riddled with spelling mistakes, very hard to read.
BatVocate chapter 10 . 12/11/2017
Ok I appreciate your efforts but honestly, I think you need to hire a new beta. There are a lot of mistakes, especially in the last three chapters.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2017
I found this chapter, 6, hard to read because of the shameless RENT plagiarism and the random insert character. Poorly written.
Kimmytrainer chapter 6 . 11/12/2017
Harry won't end up another dark lord in this story, will he? I seriously need it to have a relatively happy ending.
Kimmytrainer chapter 5 . 11/12/2017
Alright I really don't like Harry in this story. He's playing with fire.
Kimmytrainer chapter 4 . 11/12/2017
I honestly cannot tell where this is going. Oh, and I see it's not okay for me to like Rita. She's obviously still a bitch, even if she sounded sincere in the article. There's so much negative emotion in this story! I hope something positive happens by the end.
Kimmytrainer chapter 3 . 11/12/2017
Oooooh damnnnnn
Kimmytrainer chapter 2 . 11/12/2017
Dumbledore sucks. How did Ron and Hermione get into a fight with Harry anyway? And Sev is annoyingly bitter and unkind. Sigh I prefer a compassionate Severus, even if it's only a rare thing and is kept secret.
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
I hope you don't find swearing offensive cuz holy fuck that gave me chills! Is it okay to like Rita in this story?
senawario chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
Is this English? Many of the words appear to be, but so many are not... amazing language-crossover. (Jokes apart, how old are you? Good plot but utterly rubbish English. Spoiled the whole thing rotten for me)
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