Reviews for A house elf of a muggle family
gleefan2009 chapter 10 . 1/15
love it please write more
Guest chapter 10 . 1/3
Hey, are you planning on continuing this story? Because it's friggin good
Mari Wollsch chapter 10 . 12/23/2017
great, why is you story coplete in the middle? xxxxxxxxxx
jflamewalker chapter 10 . 12/13/2017
Either sack your beta, or get one. Riddled with spelling mistakes, very hard to read.
UNEDUCATED394 chapter 10 . 12/11/2017
Ok I appreciate your efforts but honestly, I think you need to hire a new beta. There are a lot of mistakes, especially in the last three chapters.
Guest chapter 6 . 11/28/2017
I found this chapter, 6, hard to read because of the shameless RENT plagiarism and the random insert character. Poorly written.
Kimmytrainer chapter 6 . 11/12/2017
Harry won't end up another dark lord in this story, will he? I seriously need it to have a relatively happy ending.
Kimmytrainer chapter 5 . 11/12/2017
Alright I really don't like Harry in this story. He's playing with fire.
Kimmytrainer chapter 4 . 11/12/2017
I honestly cannot tell where this is going. Oh, and I see it's not okay for me to like Rita. She's obviously still a bitch, even if she sounded sincere in the article. There's so much negative emotion in this story! I hope something positive happens by the end.
Kimmytrainer chapter 3 . 11/12/2017
Oooooh damnnnnn
Kimmytrainer chapter 2 . 11/12/2017
Dumbledore sucks. How did Ron and Hermione get into a fight with Harry anyway? And Sev is annoyingly bitter and unkind. Sigh I prefer a compassionate Severus, even if it's only a rare thing and is kept secret.
Kimmytrainer chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
I hope you don't find swearing offensive cuz holy fuck that gave me chills! Is it okay to like Rita in this story?
senawario chapter 1 . 10/16/2017
Is this English? Many of the words appear to be, but so many are not... amazing language-crossover. (Jokes apart, how old are you? Good plot but utterly rubbish English. Spoiled the whole thing rotten for me)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2017
With Snape looking into Harry memories during their occlumency 'lessons' shouldn't all of that be old news already?
kase519 chapter 9 . 10/5/2017
Definitely need some proof reading
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