Reviews for What If |
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a fan of this chapter 8 . 6/19/2023 This chapter has ended quite well, the last conversation has been great |
a fan of this chapter 7 . 6/19/2023 another chapter that I feel should have been extended a bit more |
a fan of this chapter 2 . 6/19/2023 Honestly, I think that although this chapter is great, we needed to know what was going on? Snape would continue to teach but forced to give it well? Would they change their potions teacher? Would you change any other teacher? it seems unfinished just because of that |
HoneyBear84 chapter 14 . 6/2/2023 Love them and wish they were longer |
Jestrbob chapter 7 . 4/16/2023 Some place in a story I read, Hermione doing the same thing, and it nearly or did take her magic. |
KoldT chapter 10 . 3/19/2023 Making me smile. |
Kaylen.b4444 chapter 13 . 3/19/2023 This might be my favorite one lol |
KoldT chapter 1 . 3/19/2023 Worthy of a stand alone in itself. |
Jestrbob chapter 4 . 2/27/2023 I would very much like to see where this idea goes. |
furface294 chapter 4 . 1/27/2023 Hoping that you take this further. |
ReaderNotWriter2 chapter 9 . 12/13/2022 yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss |
IloveHeat chapter 10 . 11/2/2022 I love this version. Thank you |
Noobmaster6785 chapter 10 . 8/26/2022 very good concept |
you chapter 14 . 7/31/2022 did well |
sadly chapter 12 . 7/31/2022 you did not send sirius flying, too -.- |