I like this and look forward to more! :-)

That little girl in the first part of the story just won my little heart. What a cutie.

good one, actually would be great to see something like this as a cross over with some anime or manga

Love it! Can't wait for more! :D

I love this. So glad to find something new from you :)

glad to have you back. Always good to see a smarter, more willing-to-question Harry!

WOOW. So will the other "what if" moments be additional chapters, or their own stand-alone fics?

Can't wait for the next one!

Good luck with whatever projects you're currently working on

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I'd really like to see the chaos BWL left in Wizardling Britain.

Fantastic. I love stories where the author explores one small change and the ensuing repercussions. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Very interesting and looking forward to others.

Very nice. I have recently re-read you Harrison Potter Stephens and others of your earlier works. I have enjoyed everything of yours that I have read in the past, and this is no exception. Loved it, and I hope there are more "What ifs" to come. Thanks for a good read.

Seriously. Its like the fanfiction version of the youtube series How it Should Have Ended. Lol. Awesome.

This was excellent. I never liked other people having Harry's key or how he was restricted in going to the bank.

I too wondered about Harry's lack of post other schools would want him and people would send him thing. Not getting a reply even in the paper as general thanks would harm Harry's reputation.

A very good question "are there other war orphans similarly placed or was it only the savior of our world that suffered this way"

I am pleased Harry has been healed and is not in the UK given his fame he won't be safe or happy there I think.

The change in Harry's magical signature was a nice touch. As was the breaking of a Goblin treaty I think people would want to avoid a goblin war at all cost.

I think Dumbledore would have few friends given how he likes to meddle and keep secrets. The Goblins should get good PR for helping Harry a nice profit is good too.

People getting a refund for Harry Potter books was good to mention as I never liked how people made money from Harry and he never seemed to get any of it.

Thanks for this it would be interesting to know how Harry's absence changes things at Hogwarts and in magical UK. The prophecy should no longer be an issue and what happens to Riddle, Ron and Hermione without Harry's influence.

If you are going to continue this story then I would enjoy reading it. Nice plot line and caught my interest. Will look for more from you.
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Nice work.