Reviews for On Wings of Steel
FiendLurcher chapter 11 . 9/4
Not a huge fan of the gun versions, since they're kind of garbage, but whatever. Good intrigue and build-up.
FiendLurcher chapter 8 . 9/4
Schemiya Schemiro.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3
Huuuuuuh? I thought copyright infringement was illegal?
Being a cuck isn’t. And neither is being. Self-righteous brat. and neither is being in a circlejerk. But come on. I thought someone would get the hint by pretty obvious.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/10
Great chapter!
I really appreciate you posting here, so thanks for that.
Bivness chapter 13 . 5/3
This is great.
vinayakdj1 chapter 13 . 4/15
Nearly a decade and 13 chapters...wow

And i thought I was slow
Dareth chapter 11 . 4/10
I think it's fairly obvious why EMIYA never came up with those weird gunswords...they function as, both, unwieldy awkward guns, and horribly impractical swords...
E chapter 13 . 4/8
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.

But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.

The story is good, though. No problems there.
E chapter 13 . 4/8
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.

But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.

The story is good, though. No problems there.
D72 chapter 13 . 4/9
I know Seo was friends with Takehito Asama, but it would be funnier if he was also the drinking buddy of Kiritsugu.

"Man, that dude never shut up about vampires. Weepy drunk too. I was glad when that Blonde picked him up. How's he doing?"
V01dSw0rd chapter 13 . 4/8
(Unfortunately, the discord server is inaccessible on iOS…)
Guest chapter 13 . 4/5
Oh hey it’s an update by the possible future reason for harsher copyright laws because his inability to take criticism lead to exclusive stuff guy.
I wish I could just know you as the creator of top one of all like three Medea fanfics guy.
But also being the cuck guy and not knowing how FanFiction works guy kinda overshadows that.
Which is unfortunate, because you being known more for the fetish stuff and money & clout stuff makes me less excited for your updates.
skrapsynneh chapter 13 . 4/7
Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
KnightR1 chapter 13 . 4/6
pretty disappointing author and your ff, i don't even know why are you still posting a old chapter, from your paywall patreonbuy hey i found a way to bypass it and read those ff at patreonnow i see why so many ol reviewer's in past critic you and force to move out and post somewhere and what make it worse a Patreon, be a member so you can read, lmao

i be honest i like your "Path of the King" Medea Route since start and more it progressed the story it's turned out to become more BULLSHIT Progress
and i don't even know how it turned to be like that

and the Hinata FF quite good, you see Illya arrival
Tohsaka Arrival they made Sex probably if i recall
btw Rider arrival too and Outside Sex, and NeoAlfa Shirou going home too, and Having Sex with Sakura too and oh.. don't forget your little ass Neoalfa Shirou is Fate Route too, long ass chapter yet no progressed at finding saber

and now this ff wing of steel.. last time i read your Paywall Patreon they're more like RATS! hiding someone House and yeah they're more Bond to be a TERRORIST and what's with Shirou having a Emiya Alter Pistol? yeah i don't blame the Sekirei organization if your Neoalfa Shirou is like an ass
yet in the end no one can beat The Gabrielle Blessing FF

you know in the end I'm pretty disappointed, being your reader at 2 year's and now this
Jaydog123 chapter 13 . 4/6
Amazing chapter cant wait for the next one!
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