Reviews for On Wings of Steel
Prodigal Priest chapter 4 . 1/6
Y'know... there's another way than to have sex with Akitsu to fix her Scrap Number status. Rule Breaker. It breaks magical contracts with no consequences for either side. So if you wanted to you could go that route and showcase Akitsu choosing to stay with Shirou AFTER she becomes able to Bond with someone.
BeoWolf666 chapter 7 . 12/23/2024
The underwear store is the one battlefield. Shirou will not step foot into, thats a different kind of hell he’d be walking into
FiendLurcher chapter 11 . 9/4/2024
Not a huge fan of the gun versions, since they're kind of garbage, but whatever. Good intrigue and build-up.
FiendLurcher chapter 8 . 9/4/2024
Schemiya Schemiro.
Guest chapter 13 . 6/3/2024
Huuuuuuh? I thought copyright infringement was illegal?
Being a cuck isn’t. And neither is being. Self-righteous brat. and neither is being in a circlejerk. But come on. I thought someone would get the hint by pretty obvious.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/10/2024
Great chapter!
I really appreciate you posting here, so thanks for that.
Bivness chapter 13 . 5/3/2024
This is great.
vinayakdj1 chapter 13 . 4/15/2024
Nearly a decade and 13 chapters...wow

And i thought I was slow
Dareth chapter 11 . 4/10/2024
I think it's fairly obvious why EMIYA never came up with those weird gunswords...they function as, both, unwieldy awkward guns, and horribly impractical swords...
E chapter 13 . 4/8/2024
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.

But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.

The story is good, though. No problems there.
E chapter 13 . 4/8/2024
I've got to say, the plot is excellent and the characterizarion is very enjoyable. I've read up to 31 anxd it's only gotten better.

But seriously, it is insane that you have 31 written chapters and you have only posted 13. I cannot fathom a reason why that'd be. I get the whole "more on patreon" thing, but these aren't even subscriber only, they're just fully done and open to anyone who opens the link. Why are they just arbitrarily not posted? It can't be some kind of ploy to get people to join the discord server because you can do what I did; which is join, get the link, then leave. This decision is incomprehensible.

The story is good, though. No problems there.
D72 chapter 13 . 4/9/2024
I know Seo was friends with Takehito Asama, but it would be funnier if he was also the drinking buddy of Kiritsugu.

"Man, that dude never shut up about vampires. Weepy drunk too. I was glad when that Blonde picked him up. How's he doing?"
V01dSw0rd chapter 13 . 4/8/2024
(Unfortunately, the discord server is inaccessible on iOS…)
Guest chapter 13 . 4/5/2024
Oh hey it’s an update by the possible future reason for harsher copyright laws because his inability to take criticism lead to exclusive stuff guy.
I wish I could just know you as the creator of top one of all like three Medea fanfics guy.
But also being the cuck guy and not knowing how FanFiction works guy kinda overshadows that.
Which is unfortunate, because you being known more for the fetish stuff and money & clout stuff makes me less excited for your updates.
skrapsynneh chapter 13 . 4/7/2024
Thank you for the chapter. I look forwards to more.
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