Reviews for On Wings of Steel
n0mster chapter 6 . 9/15/2020
It's been a long while since I read this fic but I'm glad to see it revive itself. Shirou in the Sekirei-verse is always interesting and I hope that this doesn't lead down the road to tragedy.
Storyliker chapter 10 . 9/11/2020
Nice and interesting story
littleboyblack17 chapter 10 . 9/10/2020
Noice
maesde chapter 10 . 9/6/2020
Nice!
gpno14 chapter 10 . 9/4/2020
Here's hoping Shirou wings Kazehana at a later point. Looking forward to more!
Nikkless chapter 4 . 9/3/2020
hope Shirou will wing Akitsu somehow
Nikkless chapter 1 . 9/3/2020
needs editing
CoG.EMIYA chapter 10 . 9/3/2020
So.. Is Shirou the son of Miya and Takehito?
CoG.EMIYA chapter 9 . 9/3/2020
Not all humans could become an ashikabi. Takehito Asama is the best example.
tsun chapter 10 . 9/2/2020
Good story? no actions yet and full talk.
L chapter 10 . 8/31/2020
I genuinely cannot wait for the inevitable meeting with Miya
Star chapter 10 . 8/31/2020
How did I miss 5 chapters I never know...anyways nice buildup...but curious about the A/N.

Will u stop uploading new chapters on and stick to patreon or is patreon just faster access?
giodan chapter 10 . 9/1/2020
Ty for the update! The story is good and take is onw time, keep it up!
Guest chapter 10 . 8/30/2020
As good as the story is, like many other review here suggest...You may need to delve more in the lore of Fate to understand their power level and such. Additionally even Rin can theoretically freezes an entire warehouse with enough preparation. Sekirei is just better than even intermediate Magus but still miles beneath any servants. Whether Akitsu can beat Lorelei is highly doubted for example.
AznPuffyHair chapter 10 . 9/1/2020
...I kind of had this vision of Akitsu saying "because my master is a wiseass" when Kazehana asked how he was even alive after meeting Karasuba... but that's impossible. It is impossible because Akitsu never learned cheeks.

Still, i'm not entirely sure if everything is worth the wait, more because it feels like nothing was getting done. Still, you did worked on it, so that's a plus. Now i just have to patiently wait to see what happen next before swarming you with questions.

Keep up the good work.
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