|Reviews for Merry Christmas|
| Martin III chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Funny. Your comment "we would have made it all the way to Evolution FIVE by now!" was made only two years after "2" came out - too little time for even Evolution 4 to be possible, except as a glitch-ridden rush job.
Anyway, this... isn't terribly good. Mag and Linear are both uncharacteristically forthright about their emotions, some of the grammar is terrible, there's no direction or unifying point to the story, but the biggest problem is that most of the story is plagiarized from other sources. The whole scene with Mag watching Linear dance through the window and being caught by Gre is obviously lifted from "Birthday Embrace" by GirlAnime, and the ending dialogue is copied verbatim from a Foxtrot strip! Those are the two most troubling examples, but not the only ones.
This fic isn't terrible by any means - just a harmless bit of fun - but it's not what I'd call a worthwhile or enjoyable read.
One last thing. You ought to have this marked as "complete", not "in progress".
| VampireHunterSephiroth200 chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
I like this story. Personally though, I think Evolution would be better teamed up with Tales of Symphonia and Skies of Arcadia. Or perhaps Breath of Fire and Final Fantasy? At any rate, it's a good game and you make good fics!
| Happichu chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
hahahhah...that was cute, I like the story and I like Christmas! that was nice too. .
| Inuyasha245 chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
funny, you guys are good.
| Hysteric Polaris chapter 1 . 1/2/2003
This is so good! I especially liked the little chibi shoulder angels.
| Lanee chapter 1 . 12/27/2002
i have no clue what evolution is though...
must watch and find out...
*zombie walk to the TV*
that was so funny!~
it was funny...
and did i mention that is was seriously funny?
| Dragon's Tongue chapter 1 . 12/17/2002
How sweet. Maybe I should do a Dragon Duelist Christmas fic, or something.
[AND, ONCE AGAIN, NO MENTION OF A CERTAIN RED-HEADED GIRL, WHO COULD HAVE KICKED COMPLETE ARSE IN A SNOWBALL FIGHT!]