Reviews for Something So Right
Nicky chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
Dirty story! Is it from life? I think the lez way isn't right 4 s/f but good anywayz!
S-Rok chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
no comment..i don't think they'd really be like that, espiecally fran..i guess if u have a good imagination. Besides, Syd had a finace' and so did Fran
S-Rok chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
no comment..i don't think they'd really be like that, espiecally fran..i guess if u have a good imagination. Besides, Syd had a finace' and so did Fran
S-Rok chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
no comment..i don't think they'd really be like that, espiecally fran..i guess if u have a good imagination. Besides, Syd had a finace' and so did Fran
jewls13 chapter 1 . 12/20/2002
ok, not bad. but reading this, one line stuck out and made me think of a way to make this story a bit darker and more angst. the part where Syd says "she wanted to bea good friend but.." or something like that. what if...Francie started off the way you have it, but Syd is not into, but keeps goin-because of major pangs of guilt she feels for lying to Francie. You know, she feels like she's been bad in the friend department and she's trying to make up for it...but she's not into it. A syd POV while she's with Francie, she's not into it, she feels sick (not because it;s a girl-girl thing, but because being with someone you don't want to be with always makes you feel sick-I should know, I'm still feeling it) but she keeps going because she feels like she owes it to her...

ok, sorry for that, it;s rude to review a fic this way, but I just got this idea-not like I'd ever write it-'cause I don;t write Alias, and to be honest, I'm not sure I'd even wanna read somethig like that (lately, I'm not into the dark and distrubed, I have too much of that in my life, lol). But this was an origional idea, and I applaud you for it.
Danielle Smiley-Face chapter 1 . 12/19/2002
As the first Alias fem slash I've yet to find, not bad... pretty well-written lesbian action. Of course, I wish they both had realized they were lesbians, but despite that, I'm still a really big Vaughn-Sydney fan. I have to applaud you for posting it, though, even if it did seem a little negative on the homosexual aspect, just how Sydney and Francie were both talking about it, which may have been to reassure themselves they were straight (something I did during my coming out process), or to reassure your readers that you're straight (please don't take that as insulting). I mean, I am really glad that you wrote this and posted it, but those are just my thoughts. Thanks, Danielle :-)